The ideas in this novel seem very familiar to me, but nowadays, as a great writer said, "It is very difficult to write something original because all the ideas have already been written by others", but this novel, although it has ideas already known to others also have a touch of originality, this glimmer at the end of the tunnel intrigues me and makes me think: "What will happen next?" "How will the story end?" "What awaits the protagonist?" these simple questions are why I look forward to the next chapters. For a first chapter you wrote it is very good, please continue with the following chapters.