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Zokeh_Samuel1yrCommentedfor real😂 are they not ashamed a bunch of weak individuals ganging up on their underclassmen
"You're weak... so why are you so pleased with yourself for ganging up on me?"- Zokeh_Samuel1yrReplied to MagecrafterCh 57 Premonition Of A Disaster
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Sir Magecrafter I'm sorry, I dont know how to get to you privately I was wondering if u could grant me some assistance. I'm about to apply for a contract for a novel I started here on webnovel. And I have no idea what so say about the book's 'wow factor.' Any pointers?
Ch 57 Premonition Of A Disaster - Zokeh_Samuel1yrCommented
I noticed they should all be this long🤧🤧
Hope you liked this chapter. I made it much longer than normal. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrCommented
the dude should just carry a notebook wherever he goes then. since he knows he loses memories when he shuts down, when he turns on again he'll know what the notes are about. problem solved you're welcome 😎
"I know what to do." Noir's subconscious mind rang, before fading into the darkness. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrReplied to Hile_Lawrence
I see
'Illska is lucky to move Illska's heart to the stomach. "Or else Illska would have died,' Illska thought. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrCommented
this is some insane plot armor right here😂😂
'Illska is lucky to move Illska's heart to the stomach. "Or else Illska would have died,' Illska thought. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrCommented
who else immediately though of Nanahoshi from Jobless Reincarnation 😂😂
"I'm sorry, Nishizaka was stranded from another world to this world. She was looking for her friend. So she thought you met her friend who was also stranded in this world." Said Ivaylo. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrPosted
*This review is based on my opinion at chapter 36(I havent gone further). Well there's not really much I can say. Great world builinding, good character development. The lone complaint i have is the story's pacing. I am naturally biased towards fast paced stories so I would have a hard time recommending this to someone with the same bias.
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I thought he couldn't read
Allen still didn't understand, but he chose to keep quiet for now. He felt stupid for keeping asking Rachel such basic questions and decided just to read the book when he could later. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrCommented
grammar critique: You've mentioned english is not your first language but your writting is honestly quite good. I just can't keep ignoring your mismatched pronouns though. It makes it hard to follow sometimes. for example in the case of heit. Is Heit a he or a she?
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oh my days thank goodness I dont think I'm the only one who noticed the chapters getting shorter and less frequent
Also, there'll be a mass release coming soon, so look forward to that. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrReplied to Daoist2ijEJbCh 37 Clash Between Friends
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why do you guys always use quoted pronouns for mystery like "Him" or "her" if we haven't met the character yet then telling his or her name still leaves a mystery(I know that's point), I would argue it even leaves more of a mystery even if the character has been introduced before. using "HIM" or "HER" just sounds really unnatural to me. especially when it's incorporated in dialogue(like during the shady meeting a couple of chaps back) just my thoughts I dont know if I'm the only one who finds it unnatural(i think I am😢)
He chose the latter. For their sake, for Ciara's sake... and for 'Her' sake. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrCommented
then how can you say it works on "any and ALL magic"
"That's true. Your Magic doesn't work on Bloodline Magic…" The Truth narrowed his gaze, emitting even more seriousness than before. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrCommented
good to know I'm not the only one who was thinking tha😪
Shouldn't she be recoiling from her tragedy? Why was she being so jumpy? Noir could not understand. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrCommented
use meee!!🤣🤣 I can't get it out if my head now
Since it served as a means used to prove one's identity—through the use of experts—such exercise was one of U.S.E.M.I.'s custom. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrCommented
when Noir was first introduced you described glint in his eyes I think that needs revision, bcus you only keep talking about how emotionless they are. in other words you introduced him as someone who would find the situation amusing, but he didn't. I had false expectations
His eyes were still distant, though. Too distant to fathom. - Zokeh_Samuel1yrReplied to Hile_Lawrence
please do. though I'm unsure how others feel about the repetition, I find it quite annoying.
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