Something feels weird when I read your novel. I don't know what it is but it's surely about how you deliver the story of your novel. It feels bizarre in some way. I don't know how to explain it in detail for your improvement sorry😅 but there's really a weird thing with the you write your story. BTW concerning the chapter. I think in my honest opinion, the MC should not reveal his identity (godlike identity) in the beginning of the scenario too easily. I mean he just met them for only 1 days and he already reveal everything. I know he didn't reveal everything but the fact that he casually reveal his god origin (Egyptian origin) to someone he knows for like a day baffled me. Tbh he should keep his identity for awhile and maybe reveal it when he knows and trusts them more. People have secrets you know so it's not bad thing to keep a secret to yourself. I hope this little criticism will help you when you create another novel with a MC who has secrets that he doesn't want to reveal so CASUALLY.

Avatar? Is it a wrong word translation or does Ye Hua create avatar of himself?

Bruh.... This is too funny🤣🤣🤣

That's why I like this novel. The humor is top notch. Although some may not like it, I like this type of humor sometimes

Wait how old is Yutong? I thought she is around 24 ~ 26 years old not 30yrs🤔🤔🤔

I hope that Du Zui will reveal his strength in the next chapter

Bruh I feel like you have to upload 2 chapters per day. I can't wait to see another one😭😭😭

Even someone as powerful as him, he can't even find a dead body in the desert

Bruh this is hilarious 😂😂😂

Ye Hua rizz has improved 😂😂

Something that I can't understand is why je can't sense Qing yang's pregnancy. I mean he is a supreme overlord who I assume he is one of the most powerful people in this universe. Despite being a supreme overlord I feel like Ye Hua is not very omnipotent because he can't even pinpoint anyone on the planet. Then we have a character like Qing Tiandi who can locate and sense supernatural people easily

D*mn bro I start to like Ye Hua character development more and more. It really shows how much he has changed after he became a father. I know that there are some of his old attitude still remains but nonetheless he improves himself slowly 😌😌🤭🤭

Seriously though how strong is he? I mean he does feats that are multiverse levels. Is he an universal entity like the celestial in Marvel?

Ye Yan when he see his father Ye Hua 😂😂😂

Bro I see where this is going. Ye Hua has been purposely plotting to let them fight each other😂😂😂

Yes this Qing Tiandi is strong. I hope he put up a fight against Ye Hua😌😌😌

I mean seriously I think Qing Tiandi is at least Supreme overlords level. He can sense when someone from another world is coming back and he can even pinpoint where it is located. This is something that i haven't see YeHua doing.

I hope Qing Tiandi can hurt Ye ha badly 😌😌

I hope to see some parenting experience like how Ye Hua will do as a father. To be honest there's a great potential here for a nice plot but unfortunately this is a gag comedy novel so I don't think author will touche that theme. if only author make a whole arc about parenting and what it is to be a parent, a father, this will be great not only for the plot but also for Ye Hua character development. I hope author does that😌

Come on bro. You can't end it like that I want more💀