Quite a nice chapter, keep up the good work

Due to the fact that the point of view is constantly on Bella or other characters, it seems that Xiyan is just a supporting character. I understand that you need to at least advance the plot, so I'm just giving my opinion

The only thing I can't understand is why most of the text is taken up by moments from the novel

Thanks for the chapter author dono

Thanks for the chapters

There are a lot of plot holes and unnecessary dialogues from the novel to fill in the text, and so it is quite readable, much better than most of the fan fiction in this fandom

I really liked the idea. Favorite fandom + favorite vai

Меч короля Артура?)))

Who will the author give love preference to?

I hate Lily

Have you decided to bring the Loki family to the 1st place in Orario? Heh

Ahhh such a small chapter. I want more. Need more gold

I choose Emilia

A really important question haha

Thanks for the chapter🌟