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Varinius1yrPostedSimply put - brilliant. I was skeptical at first, as I haven't really read much webnovel stuff before. The world building and character designing is absolutely brilliant! I also love the story. The characters are unique and have their own things, makes me so immersed into the book. The writing could be better - I mean that as there's quite noticeable amount of typos. That's my only gripe, though. I'm still giving 5 stars in writing quality as the wording and sentence building is beautiful. From what I've seen, the Author seems to be extremely keen on their work! Chapters come at a good pace and at top notch quality. Every time I get a notification for a new chapters I'm already there!
- Varinius1yrCommented"There is still a lot that we don't know, as like who made the clones, why there's a red JACK chip in the back of my head." Neil looked at the returning Inula and Sky quieting his thoughts and question.
- Varinius1yrCommentedA metallic hand rose from the glassed sands, the gears shifting and moving on some primordial rage, "From heaven...we were born." the robot said, searching for the one who had abandoned him.
- Varinius1yrCommentedDante activated, the bright blue light deactivated every system on the ship, even the robotic companions she brought with her were now in a dormant state. Athena chuckled as she went to jump from the side.
- Varinius1yrCommentedOnce the soldiers were in their respective kill boxes, Athena smiled issuing the wake-up command. Their screams and cries out like music to her ears of the PA system, and it was only a matter of minutes before it all fell silent.
- Varinius1yrCommented"You did excellently, now go and remove yourself of this fake skin...I am eager to be with you." Athena cringed, still remembering the woman to be wearing the elderly skin suit.
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I knew it! Wench!
"Heartless, to tell her you were her mother, the real Artemisia will be writhing in her grave at such a deception." - Varinius1yrCommented
First time for everything…
"Then what were they designed to do, because the one that came for seemed pretty intent on killing me!" Athena argued, she had never flogged someone in a wheelchair before, but there wasn't a lot that was stopping her from doing so.