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Alcem11mthReplied to AshearthBeing a magical girl is bloody awsomr
If you were given the chance to live that one perfect life you had always dreamed of… would you do it even if there were strings attached?- Alcem11mthReplied to Alcem
My Infernape and Gastordon (East Gang)
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I have no clue how everyone else had a hard with with Cynthia
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realistically he would change, his parents just died and had a funeral, he wouldn't be shy
"Yes, Uncle…" Davies meekly responded, immediately mimicking his predecessor's shy attitude and way of speaking. - Alcem11mthCommentedCh 93 Chapter 93: Becoming an Actor?
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dau douluo is what you thinking about
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I have to walk everywhere because my legs can't fit in cars or busses and I'm too tall to stand in the bus
Some people are certainly born different from others, how could some people's legs be so long! - Alcem11mthReplied to nonauno
sauce?
The corners of Qin Jianxi's lips curled up slightly. As expected, martial arts could solve many things. She was still thinking about starting a new life and whether she could be a proper lady. - Alcem1yrCommentedCh 75 Yule Ball Thy Name is Fluff
- Alcem1yrCommentedCh 89 Some time off
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- Alcem1yrCommentedCh 74 Nice (The original chapter 69)
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3 options and all are trash
(This chapter is dedicated to Avatar: the movie, might it never see the light of day ever again.) - Alcem1yrReplied to OneeSans_Shota
AHH, thank you
"Thank you Bella." I said as tears flooded my eyes. I kept playing as I held back my tears from falling, while saying, "Thank you…for making me…a human being that knew what love from a parent was…" - Alcem1yrCommented
It has been a few hours and gathered my thoughts, what I love most about this chapter is that there is serious progress while being a lighthearted chapter, we got information about, "I forgot her name", information about MC and Fleur's relationship, further confirmation on the Aunt and Nephew relationship and what she feels, how the MC feels about Fleur and where he wants that relationship to go, setting up a situation where dance classes with other students will come in, MC and Pseudo-Aunt spending time together so any tragic events will hit hard because we know and experience their relationship together and most importantly you made this whole chapter in a way that it isn't filler, it is not Skipable content, there isn't any usual MC is the butt of the joke gags, "Still can't remember her name Pseudo-Aunt" isn't annoying, I can read this chapter and say this is a chapter worth reading, 5 star chapter overall.
Ch 73 Bonus: Lessons With a Stiff Cat - Alcem1yrCommented
I honestly don't know whats going on, I reread this part 8 times already and I still don't understand
"Thank you Bella." I said as tears flooded my eyes. I kept playing as I held back my tears from falling, while saying, "Thank you…for making me…a human being that knew what love from a parent was…" - Alcem1yrCommented
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I hate mushy stuff, its just this novel doesn't have any mushy scenes
"They hold specks of stolen sunlight, that you'd miss with just a glance. And a depth of raw emotion, that can freeze you in a trance. They are a fix of melted chocolate, When I'm craving something sweet, but hold a gaze so unwavering, that I find it meet-"