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NatsuTempest8hCommentedam I the only one that gets put off by this Everytime they say anything about cultivating or meditation to control energy and stuff cause i swear every time I see that I keep on just expecting a I am above you and going to get offended easily and slap people and talk about face type of character or mc
"I told you that your species is rare. And what makes you impossible to find elsewhere again is the fact that you know a lost energy cultivation technique!"- NatsuTempest11hCommented
I agree
"But he was completely oblivious to his surroundings when he was stealing the golden egg, which was very fatal." - NatsuTempest11hCommented
I would have given an 8 or 7 at most cause of the burn
As Headmaster of Hogwarts, Dumbledore was the first to give his score for Cedric. He raised his wand and the number 9 floated above his wand, he deducted one point because of the injury at the end. - NatsuTempest17hCommented
i mean there shouldn't have even been a first time she had felt somewhat uncomfortable before so the fact she didn't leave while at the restaurant is a red flag
It took us about thirty minutes to get to MJ's house, and she didn't say anything. Apparently it was a real blow to her, but she'll be smarter next time. - NatsuTempest1dCommented
I Have my doubts considering how easily Harry survived it
In the Ministry of Magic danger scale for dragons, these two dragons occupy the top two spots since the Hebridean Black went extinct. - NatsuTempest1dCommented
author i just checked your original works and you kept all of them even though they didn't have a lot of chapters so can you please put back the previous fic and you can keep writing this one but make a new book and put all the chapters of the previous one their cause I liked it and this one is more like a new story same names and doesn't feel like a rewrite
Ch 1 High School DxD Hentai Wives [Announcement] - NatsuTempest1dCommented
hey author do you still have the other version because i kind of liked it and it sucks you just deleted it to do this new one instead of just making a new fic so what I am trying to say is can you re upload the other one again cause I get you say this is a rewrite but this feels and sounds like a new one instead of a rewrite cause rewrites usually fix errors or make the story a little more detailed and stuff like that not change the MC and everything else but keep the names of people the same cause it might be me but these 2 chapters if someone told me was a rewrite of the previous fic i would call but and say they have same name but plot and stuff is different
Ch 3 Mitarai Taming the Kendo Club Girls - NatsuTempest1dCommented
yes you are. you were about to sleep with someone you had known for the time it took to show the whole house
"I'm not a cheap slut, you know. Maybe a bit slutty," she glanced at me and finally broke the silence. - NatsuTempest1dCommented
ok so are on drugs i get it but she isn't a Uber why would she take you
"Get dressed and take me to the nearest car showroom," I took up her shirt from the floor and threw it on her face. - NatsuTempest1dCommented"Get dressed and take me to the nearest car showroom," I took up her shirt from the floor and threw it on her face.
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damn I was really hoping she wasn't a ho and the way she was acting was the MC aura but oh well hopefully it is a one night stand and stops
"Ah!" She wanted to say something but refrained. She cleared her throat, not expecting the reaction I gave. "Well, suit yourself." She gulped down both the glasses and made her way toward the main bedroom. She stopped near the door and glanced back with her head tilted. Her eyes screamed, 'Hey, come and fuck me right here and now, big boy.' She took off her coat and threw it on the floor before entering the room. - NatsuTempest1dReplied to Xcalibur_Xc
bro this takes place in America so it is 21 also why are you talking about other countries at this point it feels like next you will be like yeah but in mars the age to shoot this is 1 like bro is not their or from their and is in vacation so no need about rules of other places just the place MC from and is
As the blonde started going back inside, I leaned toward the railing and turned around to look at the beautiful surroundings, just taking it all in. Soon, I saw her walking back toward me with a drink, carrying two glasses of red wine. I decided to see where this is going. "How about some wine to celebrate this beautiful noon?" She extended a glass toward me. - NatsuTempest1dCommented
I would rather move cities unless I Could get a house there because you couldn't even pay me to live in an apartment
"Our money May," I corrected her. "And yeah, about that. First, we will deposit the cash in our accounts. Then we will buy a big apartment with a nice swimming pool somewhere in Manhattan or Queens. New furniture and all that jazz. New clothes for us and invest the rest in stocks or bonds." I have thought about this for quite some time. If I use my knowledge from my past life, I should be able to double, no, quadruple the money within a year or two. - NatsuTempest1dReplied to Handsome_daoist
cause the government is to greedy and will definitely take more that just 2.5 million
"22.5 million dollars... ok. Cut the taxes and all that crap... we will still get almost 20 million dollars... Peter. Peter!" She jumped into my arms, hugging me tightly. "You won! Oh my god, Pete. You won!" - NatsuTempest1dCommented
if you buy drink alcohol or drugs you are not going through a tough time
"That poor child. Her dad must be going through a tough time. Having no job and losing his savings isn't something easy to handle." - NatsuTempest2dCommented
yes please and thank you
Let's go back to the beginning… - NatsuTempest2dReplied to _Arsh_
it did after all why do you think he is alive still
To his credit, Batman was fast enough to throw himself on top of Canary just as the explosion went off, displaying crazy reactionary speeds.