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PyrrhicWriter4mthReplied to Hanimated- PyrrhicWriter4mthPosted
2nd review cuz what is this. this author has some cringe vendetta against men lol, the most recent one was "4 ways asshole men should suffer" and shit like that literally every 2 chapters is so cringe, idk why every web novel author has some secret fantasy about being the only good man in the universe and everybody else getting tortured for being rapists, or just being rude but this is some incel writing, wish I could give less stars
- PyrrhicWriter5mthPosted
A FULL OVERVIEW (up to chapter 500)It was good at first and is good at times but holy sh*t is it SO annoying to read. For some reason every man in the novel is either a criminal inc*stuous r*pist to have his c*ck ripped off by a girl to make her look strong and ruthless (overused as is), Or some manly competitor for the MC to beat look good with, (with outliers like his masters) Now with this you'd assume it's the run of the mill s*xist author who overuses r*pe tropes cuz he doesn't know any other way to empower women in his novel, and you'd be half right, cuz for some reason EVERY woman in the story is getting flirted with, objectified, seduced, and fucked by the mc with ease and with almost no development leading to that? like "oh this relationships kinda ass" *insert unnecessary and out of nowhere s*x scene with emotional points so the mc doesn't look like an inconsiderate perv* all of which is ignored a few chapters later because it wasnt real and it was just a firced sex scene, and the author needs to wallow in his characters self pity some more. like, literal demigods that could look at him to death are getting seduced and getting all h*rny for him in 2 seconds for no reason at all, no development, no character building, he just confidently talks down to them and they fall for him for some reason?all this while the MC wails about how hard his relationships are, and his literal hoes always pin the blame on him and he somehow sides with them every time?? like it's both their fault why is it EXCLUSIVELY being pinned on him throughout the whole story?? not to mention the overbearing amount that extraneous shit is done, it'll be MAYBE 1-2 chapters of training/combat and another 4 for each of his girlfriends, 4 for his mom, 4 for some random weak planet or 2 each, it's so slow and exhausting with quick power jumps over 1-2 chapters followed by pointless time wasting not only in writing but for the mc, who's for some reason the most clever and witty person in arguments with people 1000x stronger and older than him, but a f*cking idiot when it comes to powering up and relationships.overall it looks like the author has some oddball savior and "super cool masculine seducer" fetish along with insane amounts of attention seeking self pity he can't help but put in his writing, its like all the blame HAS to be assigned to this MC of his so his persona can get attention and pity from everybody and he can j*rk off in a dark room to the characters he seduces, insane amounts of potential and has pretty good writing but by far one of the most excruciating, cringe, unnecessarily wasteful and ruined novels I've read. so horrible
- PyrrhicWriter6mthCommented
The author forcing himself to write this down so some teenagers will get weird fantasies and keep reading
"Sure sure you'll be the one beating me up. You have to be careful though, if you lose I might just have to spank your butt as punishment." Damien replied with a sly smile. - PyrrhicWriter6mthReplied to DjbomberHowever, whether through mana or science, perpetual motion has never been achieved. Nothing could continue moving indefinitely when it was drawing from a finite power source.
- PyrrhicWriter6mthReplied to Rick_EvansHis ambition for his mana circuits was as grand as can be. Maybe not within these 5 months, but sometime in the future, he wanted his mana circuits to act as a perpetual motion system. If his idea succeeded, he'd, in theory, gain access to a nigh-infinite supply of magic power.
- PyrrhicWriter6mthCommentedHowever, precisely because it was constrained and limited by the laws of physics, modern science was full of great ideas and the ingeniousness of mankind. Many things were already theorized using science that became easily applicable due to mana.
- PyrrhicWriter6mthCommented
I love the silly old mentor trope đ
When Damien closed his eyes, the man took a peek behind him and witnessed Damien completely ignoring him. He was disgruntled but didn't bother the kid as he recovered his mana. Half an hour later, Damien's eyes began to open, and the man returned to his original pose of gazing into the distance. - PyrrhicWriter6mthReplied to Dark_phoenix_01
transformation is at stage 4 lol
"Katherine Hart Age 21 Level 85 Wind and Illusion Affinity" - PyrrhicWriter6mthReplied to Recipe_Brassiere
wow another person who can't understand satire and hates the idea of girls being somewhat dominant
Cold sweat drenched his body. 'Devils. They're truly devils who can read my mind.' The whole situation was so bizarre to him, who was terrible at social contact, that he forgot that one of them could genuinely read his mind. - PyrrhicWriter6mthCommented
"not me tho yall stay safe"
"Wow! You weren't kidding about your cooking skills. This is wifey-level skill right here for sure! Someone needs to wife you up ASAP!" Damien sang his praises before quickly adding, "not me though." - PyrrhicWriter6mthCommented
that one loser in the comments: "he should've been a cold ruthless mc and rped her to death for that transgression!! what a simp! boooo!!" like bruh
Damien shook his head. This girl seemed intent on intruding on his property no matter what. Even in that short amount of time they'd met each other before they went their separate ways to train, she had forced him to give her his address. - PyrrhicWriter6mthCommentedThe whole area was like a wasteland where life couldn't grow anymore and craters littered the cracked earth. The living greenery only existed over a kilometer away from the crux of the battle. 'What the hell happened here? Because I for sure didn't cause this.'
- PyrrhicWriter6mthCommented
Losers who hate on the old teacher training arc needa skin themselves, the technical power jumps are the best
He smiled to himself once more. "Interesting! Interesting indeed. The kid's destructive power is great, but he has plenty to improve on. Haha, I'm excited to see the looks on those elders' faces when I'm finished with him." - PyrrhicWriter6mthCommented
bro following 2 people outta curiosity
He didn't want to cause damage in the academy and be forced to pay for it. However, neither Damien nor Zara noticed a third presence tailing them with interest. - PyrrhicWriter6mthCommented
bro has so many eyes on him đ
"Ohoho, what an interesting duo. Especially that boy. It seems I should keep an eye on him." - PyrrhicWriter6mthCommented
almost like leaving the place where you grew the most and had a free path to demigod level isn't a good idea, wow who could've guessed. đ
There weren't many changes to his status since he had last checked it in Kurt's subspace besides his long-forgotten subclass. - PyrrhicWriter6mthReplied to Dennis_Roedlich
fr lol what's the point of a cliche academy experience if there's no entitled nobles and nice people
2 weeks passed at the academy, but Damien hadn't achieved anything special. Besides having to attend a single class once a week, his life wasn't that different from when he was an adventurer. - PyrrhicWriter6mthReplied to HoaquinalArieDamien was halfway to 3rd class.