Dont want to be a bittergourd here, but this is 6th story with same start and same plot. just names are different. always mc catches his wife cheating, he is still a virgin, as soon as he is thrown out a rich girl arrives and gives back his pendant and blood flowing from mc changes the jade. there is a marriage contract, he is under dog... what i want to know is, why is the original author not suing the other copycats?

sure... i will keep going then.

the premise is good. but please stop spoon feeding the readers. also there is repetition of few things like how the mc feels with each movement of fay. it becomes boring. till now i have skipped most of the part of your story. because after every other dialogue or movement its always going back to how the mc is feeling. sticking around just to see where the story is going. pls dont disappoint.

many unwanted details.... in making it more realistic the author has inadvertently made the mc a simp and a looser. the mannerisms and thoughts of mc are too.... how do you say it... too soft.

'immune system needs to be taken out.' Are you serious???

so basically the author is increasing word count with useless repetitive things....5 chapters and they are just hugging.... are we fools?

At first the MC's no nonsense and non flirty attitude hooked me up. I thought I would get to read something different. It was different from those other novels. But later it went along the same line. The MC became more and more shameless and obnoxious and the women around him did nothing but turn red and threaten to kill him and then put up with him. A good romantic plot wasted away.

I am loosing interest in this one because the MC is a lying cheating piece of shit. He is clearly cheating on his master who is so caring and loving towards him. Even when he is supposed to be feeling guilty and introspecting on how he let her down, he is spending nights with other girl. This is not romantic anymore. It sucks to see a cheater as a main hero.

The initial premise hooked me. But it quickly went downhill after first 300 episodes. It gets so irritating that I started wishing that someone should just slap that MC Wang Teng or better just kill him. Let me tell you why- 1. Start from Wang Teng - The writer in order to make Wang Teng appear cool and laid back, has written some very cringe dialogues. It actually infuriates the reader to read his dialogues. There is zero logic as to why he speaks and acts as the way he acts. And the only justification we get every time for his action is because the other party had bad intentions. He really make us hate him. Eg in chapter around 790, he enters the boundary of another country. There the defense system mistakes him for a sea beast as he enters from sea side and is riding a giant raven 'White'. So the system fires on him. Mind you, no one actually is hurt because he is far more powerful. But he just destroys the system because he is angered by it. That defense system is the first line of defense against the sea riots which that country experiences frequently. I mean come on how can author write the character to be so senseless? 2. The side characters- They are just meant for four things-a. to be put down by Wang Teng. b. To be in awe of Wang Teng's shamelessness and his words and actions. c. To emphasise the greatness of Wang Teng and d. To roll eyes at Wang Teng. 3. Most of the time MC is collecting attributes. And most of the good skills are left and forgotten. For example golden body art. He can use it and develop it on his own. But no! He has to wait for new bubbles to develop it. That MC is just a fraud. Zero intelligence. 4. Repetitive- it gets repetitive. I mean everything is repetitive. 5. Conversation between characters- I mean there is war going on where every second wasted means many lives gone. But what do our MC and his sidekicks do? They act cool and flirt or try to have one over other or they just talk about something nonsense. Sometimes, instead of fighting, the MC and his opposing character just have some heart to heart chat. Just get a room already. I think the author should stop this bullshitting and try to write it neatly. It has a good story but is ruined by shitty writing by the author.