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DetectiveEspionist4mthPostedSo far it is a dark and fast paced book. Looking forward to seeing it progress like it has rather than the drawn out nature of most web novels.
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I think I have read fortnight in this webnovel more than all other literature combined
A fortnight passed before Erich said goodbye to his wives once more, or at least two of them. Mala had accompanied Erich back onto his ship, as he set course for Alfheim to retrieve his newest member of the team. - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented
bodieS??? Tia army inbound
Immediately after acquiring the planet, Tia hired a company to ferry a bunch of construction robots to its surface, who began to build the infrastructure necessary to maintain the production of her new bodies. - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented
Oh God. The fake mark of virginity makes it way into this story.
Still, Erich continued to assault Lunaria's lips while playing with her moist and puffy kitty down below. It was abundantly clear to him that this woman was indeed still a virgin, because it did not take long for his fingers to find the mark of her purity. - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented
Even Emrys knows he has it
Of course, Emrys was also free from such notions. After all, despite Erich's superhuman ability to seduce women, there was no way that the Alfheim Empress would entertain such a thought. Even if she did have a penchant for Germanic men. - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented
embrace was a bit too literal in her mind
Of course, Erich had no idea that Celestia had been determined to do this since before the ball even began. After her mother had stripped her status as the Heiress to the Alfheim Dominion, she had decided to stop struggling against her fate and instead embrace it. She saw no way which she and Erich could reasonably be together, other than by forcing it like this. - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented"Don't you dare touch a single hair on Erich's beautiful silver head! Mother, this man has done nothing wrong, and you know it! I have freely chosen to take this man into my embrace, which by the laws of our family means we are now husband and wife! Would you dare to sully our ancient traditions because of your petty jealousy?"
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except she LITERALLY touched his chin on the ship
The Entirety of the ball room gasped in shock at this sight. Everyone knew what it meant for an outsider to touch a member of the Asterion Dynasty, but nobody had ever seen an Alfheim Princess volunteer to touch such an individual. Needless to say, Empress Lunaria and the rest of her household were beyond furious with Celestia's sudden and shocking actions. - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented
Literally the first thing he was told. NO FLIRTING!
"Yumi, Ayumi, it is good to see you both. You are both so beautiful that you are about to make me blush. I know that it hasn't been long since we last met. But it feels like it has been a lifetime. It is good to see that you are both doing so well…." - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented
uhhhh... one already touched his chin
If you were to even brush shoulders with one of them, then it would be considered a great taboo by the Light Elven race. And a sin of the highest order! I would not be able to save you then! So keep your distance from them! You will know who they are, by their signature white hair and golden eyes. Now, with that said, I believe we have a party to attend to." - DetectiveEspionist4mthReplied to Chibikit
don't forget the very fashioned stances on personal liberty in the human confederacy arc. Everything gives off red flags but it is so good.
Once more Erika had started talking about her sex life, with a rather proud smile on her face. As if it was a symbol of her victory over Ayumi. After all, Erika was born and bred for the sole purpose of becoming a sex object to the masses. Sure, she might have a heavenly voice, and be able to dance well enough, but it was her appearance which had gotten so many men to worship her as their goddess. - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented
oh no Tia. You have messed up.
He had had no idea how his unit had already been spotted by the enemy, nor could he see their figures despite his advanced sensors. Something was jamming them, and Celarion did not know how. Because as far as he was aware, the Germanic Star-Empire did not have the technological capability to jam the advanced sensors of the Alfheim Dominion. - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented
I love the detail of this ship. 10/10
Erich was by far the youngest representative of the Germanic Star-Empire, and because of that, he was the only one who was looking around the ship like a complete and total idiot. Finally, they arrived at a transit, which was little more than a high-speed train, which took them through the dwarf planet sized vessel in a matter of minutes. - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented
It seems pretty unlikely she would already know exactly what W3 entailed, but maybe she does an insane amount of research on the German empire.
"I am sure a man as talented as him will succeed within three months. That is more than enough time for him to show up at the War Games. Besides, has he not already survived one drop? Surely he doesn't need a full six months of training for something he has already proven capable of doing?" - DetectiveEspionist4mthReplied to couch_god
The author left a completely believable plot twist to be announced and you are mad? It was believable they did this themselves as they focused so much on medical technology, but this twist makes even more sense.
"Oh, he died alright, several times from the sound of it. The Germanic Star-Empire has advanced cloning technology, that I may have had a hand in. Still, it's hard to believe they managed to store a copy of Kondo Yumi's DNA, and memories. I wonder how that happened... - DetectiveEspionist4mthPosted
Grimdark-ish setting with so many personal relations which are written with so much immaturity from the characters that it is realistic.Plot holes are almost always setups for plot twists which keep stringing me along and making me want to read more.Few other books have made me just want to see character interactions like this one has.Smut is a side to the actual story so if you want to read smut then leave but if you want actual personal relations then this is for you Setting is kinda cringe at times with the socialist German ideology, but the story doesn't proclaim it as the correct choice either. (sometimes it gets a little close though)
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This woman... It all makes too much sense...
"While the primary mission was completed with just barely satisfactory results, the secondary mission which you have tasked me with is going smoothly. While Erich does not trust me just yet, nor do I ever really think I will be able to fully gain his trust again after my previous betrayal. He has become less hostile. To the point where he has grown comfortable with me by his side. He may even have let a thing or two slip..." - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented
He decided to fulfill the second condition
Feeling as if this was a good excuse to throw his life away, Erich picked up an Oni sword which lay within the pile of corpses from the rioters, and charged towards the gate at full speed. The door was heavily reinforced steel, but against Erich's size, strength, and weight, it came crashing down the moment his shoulder impact it. - DetectiveEspionist4mthCommented
She went from doing everything to make his life harder, including trying to get him killed!, then to trying to seduce him.
Erich sighed heavily in defeat as he followed Mirage's actions, and stripped out of his gear until he was fully naked, where he immediately lied down on the small cot. Mirage then climbed on top of him, like a pet cat, and used his broad chest as a pillow with a wide smile on her stunning face. Before Erich knew it, she had gone into a deep sleep, leaving him utterly confused.