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- Bad_romance3mthCommented
Nice
Even successful men are not always successful but have a lot of success that covers up the Failures. As long as the goal remains, and more success accumulates, the goal shall be reached. - Bad_romance3mthReplied to 1_G_5324
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Wayyyyy too much description and side tracking of the story since recently. This is the biggest battle so far and it doesn't feel like one tbh. Not mention the MC has gon ridiculously soft. Way too much description man. What happened to the psychopathic lenny? The one that prioritizes gains over relationships? The lenny with a deadly calculative mind that outskirts everyone.
(Author's note: Okay, serious guys. Please leave review on the book. I have not had a review in so long. I don't even know if i am doing great or not. Just leave a review, please. The encouragement does wonders for my mind. Also, I write to feed. So your gifts and golden tickets help a lot. Thank you.) - Bad_romance7mthCommentedCh 559 CRAVE! is My Kiss.
- Bad_romance7mthCommented
All that description and I still can't imagine that type of walk in my head...poor imagination ig?
The earth beneath her seemed to yield willingly as if acknowledging her mastery over it. Her gait, despite its grace, carried an underlying strength that hinted at the potential for explosive force if unleashed. - Bad_romance7mthReplied to Dere_IsaacCh 552 Victor Vs Chucky (Night Dance)
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- Bad_romance7mthCommented
Is this an error? Does this mean his exp is max out? That means he should go the deep demon 6 right? Jus wondering
This paragraph has been deleted. - Bad_romance7mthReplied to lolbingolol
People are free to critique a book, whether it's good or bad it's critique. if it was a perfect novel then it would have been at number one, sadly it's far from it. this novel reminds me of author's point of view,different starting point but same situation, nothing is genuine these days nor different.
- Bad_romance7mthCommented
Your grammar & text error has improved moderately. Your description of details has highly improved, however it has been over used in recent chapters. While attention to details plays a key role in every novel, story progression is more important. 4 to 5 paragraphs or even A whole chapter spent on description is a bit unsatisfied. (In my opinion)
(Author's note: So I have been reading books to get great descriptions. Please tell me if my writing has improved.Thank You)