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Please listen to my advice. You make the cultivation realms and the process of becoming strong sooo anticlimactic. A God realm cultivator, in any novel should at least have the power of a nuclear warhead. You make them look like mere humans who can't even teleport. Please improve on this topic.
Why is it this forced? Did he not learn ANYTHING from his life in Nexus? Does he also have a curse in his brain or something? Author, I know you want to make it realistic as how someone would change through time, but that's not how a human mind works. Any average mature human would not do something like that, they would be more logical not emotional. Is he not about 40 years old? Then why is he having a dilema about so called 'humanity'? Is being 'righteous' same as being human?
I think that was hinted when you showed he broke a rule of the universe and some entity (I don't fully remember) was very angry and wanted to kill him but he couldn't so he warned mc to become a world God. So, if he has that much confidence to kill a world God , then he should be above that rank, right?
It's just nails bro , what problem do you have with that?
Well, no actually not if you are a perfect or absolute being. An absolute being would not be bored EVER NO MATTER WHAT unless he wants to. And he can do whatever he wants, he just has to think and he can do ABSOLUTELY ANYTHING LITERALLY. Nothing will matter to you unless you want it to be. And yes, it is worth to sacrifice ANYTHING for that power as you can't die unless you want to and you can resurrect them anyways. It is the same as investment in a business. You get back all your money after you are successful.
Please make cultivation a little more believable. They were the divine beasts, the strongest on the continent at least and they didn't have an ounce of intelligence or battle sense. They didn't even think they were decieved and they believed everything some random person who looks like a demon said. Even from xanxia perspective , this is ridiculous.
'Invincible' , not Invisible.
Oh, my bad.
System is kinda cringe though, ngl. It's just like an edgy teen. And ' FORGET', how does a system even Forget? Did it's data get deleted? It seems way too dumb for an entity who has lived for countless years. What's the purpose of the being who made a system with emotions? For fun?