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TATchMe2mthPostedHello guys, Author here. This book is now taking a long break because I have just got into Uni and has a lot of stuffs on my plate I won't drop this story, it is a passion project and I fully intend to finish it. However, I need a bit more time to finish up Volume 6 and 7 before I can upload it. I plan to massively rewrite Volume 5 and 6, whilst simultaneously developing Volume 7. I'll be mass releasing them once they're ready. Be warned.... Parallel Cosmos will be back with a vengeance!
- TATchMe6mthReplied to cheeki_breekiCh 10 The Weeping Peninsula (1)
- TATchMe7mthCommentedCh 3 Off She Goes
- TATchMe7mthPosted
Mandatory shameless 5 star from Author....Anyway, I'll be posting 2 short chapters every week that is about 1200 words in length. I don't really plan on giving this story a "second-draft treatment" because it's a side project, I want to make more time for my main project [Parallel Cosmos]. I do highly recommend you to check that one out if you enjoyed my writing. Other than that, happy reading everyone.
- TATchMe7mthCommentedCh 1 The Stubborn Scholar
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How could a 7 year old even lift a sword....
And I, a 7 year old, bully a 2 meter tall grown up man. - TATchMe7mthCommented
Pinning down and licking a little girl? Chris Hansen would like to have a word with you.
Now that's a development I didn't foresee! - TATchMe7mthReplied to MalphaSSeeing that he didn't want to continue the conversation I left him alone. As I wondered about his words, I made up my mind to find out what sin he committed, in order to confirm my theory. I walked past Fias room, without even taking a look, because I didn't want to deal with this evil woman who wants to hug me and take a portion of my health, for the moment.
- TATchMe7mthCommented
Too much description, Author.Imo especially in fight scenes, you don't need to describe everything. Let the reader's imagination take care of the details, you can focus on the important parts.
Meanwhile, Max knew, that his chances of winning were close to zero. From his point of view, the only way he could come out victorious, was to sacrifice a part of his body in order to create an opportunity to deal a critical blow. As he saw the cold look in Ricks eyes, he knew that if he lost, he would be tortured once again and this time there wouldn't be an opportunity to reverse the situation like before. Rick then slowly advanced towards Max, suddenly he angled his Greatsword to 90 degrees and tried to stab Max once he was close enough. Seeing this, Max hastily took a few steps back and to the right. He then aimed his crossbow and fired, successfully hitting Ricks leg with the intention of restricting his movements. Ignoring the pain, Rick attacked also aiming at his enemy's legs but only managed to scratch them. They continued to exchange attacks and as the fight prolonged, Rick noticed how disadvantageous his position was. Therefore, he decided to go for critical attack and hoped that the tarnished wouldn't die. He then aimed his next attack higher. As Max saw his chance, he grit his teeth and steeled his resolve and stepped forward to block the incoming strike with his already injured left arm, at the same time he swung his sword with the right. Facing the incoming attack, Rick realized his mistake, but it was already too late. He underestimated the tarnished resolve of being willing to sacrifice parts of his body to achieve victory. He could only watch as the blade split his neck open. - TATchMe7mthReplied to SoulsBorne_Lover
Good luck haha, focus on learning to deflect and you'll be golden
The combat won't be the same as the game.... it'd primarily be like Sekiro's combat with Elden Ring's Ashes of War. This is because it's impossible to write good combat using Elden Ring's dodge-roll mechanics alone vanilla's combat is just not nuanced enough. - TATchMe7mthReplied to SoulsBorne_Lover
An obvious question, since this he's a warrior he'll be using a Zweihander with a few off hand weapon (kind of like Sekiro's prosthetic tools).I don't think I'll give him any incantations or magic, but I'll consider letting him cast Laws of Regression because of spoiler reasons.
Ch 1 To the Lands Between.... - TATchMe9mthPosted
Chapter 1 is short and straight to the point, which is a good thing because it's for setting the tone of the story as well as giving an idea about the background of the MC, Aria.Well I'll get straight to the point. The writing is great because of the diverse word choice and each sentences flows nicely with each other, complimenting the already vast vocabularies of the book.A solid read, I must say.
- TATchMe10mthCommented
The Butcher when he asks me if I want beef :
1 Don't Unlock in process of rewrite - TATchMe11mthReplied to JustS0me0neFrench
The Tengu guy. His dialogue implies that he wants to go on a night stroll with Kyrie under normal circumstances, that's why Kyrie laughed at it and pats his shoulder as a friendly gesture.
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I mean, why bother when they are only here for a chapter anyway haha
"That? It's a mosque built for the Arabian traders that visit this city." Said the Indian guide that we hired to take us on a trip through the city.