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im enjoying it so far, nothing to complain about! keep up the good work author :) ... apparently these reviews have a minimum letter requirement so im going to ramble on a little with fancy words and cascading turns of frase. did you know that when the opportunity rover went offline the last message they sent it was a song?
I love adventure time as a setting, im definitely going to be reading this for as long as you keep ot going :) If i had to offer criticism, im having a hard time getting a read on the main characters personality to be honest. He's kinda coming off as goofy but in a childish way rather than it being a joke or a choice? I don't know if that's what you were going for or not.