Thanks for the chap

Dont drop this pls this is one of the most high quality novels in terms of writing I have seen here plus the mc is really good

If you have all this time to hate then just go and do something else bro

In every single one of your comments you’r e hating bro just stop reading it

Tftc and please don’t drop I’m loving the setup so far

Thank*

Just like the other comment said the grammar can sometimes mess up the flow of the story. Also there are times where the mc is expressing his thoughts on the situation and it sounds like an info dump as well as if it’s written in third person and not his perspective.It also happens in the dialogue a couple of times. Other than that the story is great man and I really like the direction you’re taking it in man kepp going!