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  • storminthelibrary
    storminthelibrary11mth
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    The plot is actually interesting, but I hate how the women are written and how the mc views everyone. It just seems very misogynist to me. :(

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    Returning From The Magic World
    Urban · Dark_Crow1111
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  • storminthelibrary
    storminthelibrary11mth
    Commented

    Hello, I like this book so far!

    Ch 1 1- A lonely soul
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    THE POISON DEITY
    Action · B_DRAG
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  • storminthelibrary
    storminthelibrary11mth
    Commented

    i think some of the interactions are very awkward, but i'm okay with that. conversation isn't always fluid and smooth in real life either.

    Author's notes: Part of me feels that this is too slow, but maybe my desire to reach the fighting parts is affecting my judgment. I don't think I can accelerate the pace without neglecting important details, and I want to avoid that. Still, let me know what you think.
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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • storminthelibrary
    storminthelibrary1yr
    Commented

    improve the grammar and maybe edit this chapter a bit? other than that it's pretty good!

    Ch 3 Intercepting first opportunity
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    Villain: Destiny Transfer System
    Fantasy · YAMRAAJ_021
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    storminthelibrary1yr
    Commented
    "Thus both sister and brother decide to become lovers."
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    Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • storminthelibrary
    storminthelibrary1yr
    Commented

    I'm enjoying it! I don't really see any mistakes.

    Author's notes: Do let me know if the chapters become boring or something. I'm trying to keep a quick pace, but I must slow down to build the world at times. Also, do you like this current release time?
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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • storminthelibrary
    storminthelibrary1yr
    Commented

    Tainted rat over roach pls

    Ch 3 Threat
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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • storminthelibrary
    storminthelibrary1yr
    Commented

    I love it when authors torment their audience XD

    Ch 2 Mines
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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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