Mao_chan02
Hello everyone, this is Mao. I'm an aspiring writer as it is my dream to be an author one day. I can't express how excited I am to be a part of this writing community, as this is my first time that I will sharing my works with others like me. Though I am nervous about it at the same time, haha. I have read my share of amazing writers and I'm so happy how so many are unique and has their own skills. I hope to make some new friends here and share our ideas and inspire each other to continue our writing talents. Thank you all so much.
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Mao_chan024mthPosted- Mao_chan024mthCommented
OP MC!
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it escalated quickly
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Don't tell me there is a bomb inside!
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Use 'so' instead of 'very' here. Just a personal advice, you can ignore it.
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He sounds like trouble 🧐
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why did I read that as Ho-Me instead of home? my mind is out of commission 🙃
A Strong whistling current of air blew throughout the city without a single direction in mind, carrying within itself weightlessly flying objects and haphazardly disorienting small free fall of water that soon started making wet dots all around. Random pedestrians that were in open places had to double up their pace as the word "HoMe!" reigned in their minds. - Mao_chan024mthPosted
So I will leave a review here. First of all, even though I have only read the four chaps, but the beginning were portrayed vividly and you can feel the effort of the author to pull out the beginning. I have to say the details of the character is eye catching.Furthermore the pace was so good that you didn't even notice that you finished the chapters. but it needs little bit of editing then it will be perfect.
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oh no
"This is... a seal?!" - Mao_chan024mthCommented
Action on 1st chapter!
Through the semi-transparent veil covering her face, a faint frown appeared. Her brows furrowed as she turned to look toward the horizon, to her left and right, and even behind. Hundreds of thousands of flashing dots, exuding various colors, were scattered everywhere! Each one released a cold killing intent, potent enough to kill one with a faint heart with it. - Mao_chan024mthPosted
SHAMELESSLY, it is the author giving my own first novel a review. i hope you all are enjoying it.this is a story that i've had in mind for a while. i also just love writing and it's always been a passion of mine. again, i'm thankful for everyone that has been reading or is reading. i hope to continue to write in the future and maybe make more novels and books!! thanks once more for reading this.
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I am especially hooked by the effort that the author put into writing the story in such a unique way! Great first chapter! I am impressed by the way it turned out. I really hope the author makes more chapters, good job fellow novelist!I totally recommend this book. You should definitely check it out!
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I used 'Fancy Text Symbols' appyou can fine that app on Play Store
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I wanted the readers attention on this part. Because this organisation will be important in the future 😌
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