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ApprenticeDaoist1mthCommentedI'm pretty sure there is supposed to be an interview pov change right here.
This paragraph has been deleted.- ApprenticeDaoist1mthCommentedCh 28 Chapter 28 – A Family Dinner
- ApprenticeDaoist1mthCommentedCh 13 13 - Growing
- ApprenticeDaoist1mthCommentedCh 85 Teasing Herrscher, Planning Gaming Industry Domination
- ApprenticeDaoist1mthCommentedCh 126 Bath
- ApprenticeDaoist1mthReplied to ApprenticeDaoist
"worng" is supposed to be "wrong".
"Dye pack check is done. Trackers were not found, stolen goods were moved so I couldn't be implicated, and my identity was kept a secret. All in all, I think I did good." Giving myself a high five, I looked to the address where my account could be accessed. - ApprenticeDaoist1mthReplied to EzioAuditore_1
"I opened the bags and checked for any trackers, and after taking them apart". This is 2 paragraphs above this one, and it clearly states that there were some tracker because he had to take them apart. You should edit either he taking them apart out or that he didn't find any since it's clearly worng.
"Dye pack check is done. Trackers were not found, stolen goods were moved so I couldn't be implicated, and my identity was kept a secret. All in all, I think I did good." Giving myself a high five, I looked to the address where my account could be accessed. - ApprenticeDaoist1mthCommented
So were there trackers in the money or did he take them apart?
"Dye pack check is done. Trackers were not found, stolen goods were moved so I couldn't be implicated, and my identity was kept a secret. All in all, I think I did good." Giving myself a high five, I looked to the address where my account could be accessed. - ApprenticeDaoist1mthReplied to Peaks
The dude has a NTR system so he needs to be around couples to get the benefit and lo and behold the group he is with has at least 2 couples (from what I understood).
John scowled but nodded. As much as he distrusted the message, staying put was certain death. Their only hope was the shelter - if they could fight their way there through the infested streets. - ApprenticeDaoist1mthReplied to ooowwweee
It would make sense if you were on an AU earth where supernatural beings existed, but he is currently in the Harry Potter world and therefore it make the most sense to follow J.K Rowling's worldbuilding regardless of where the original myths were created.
The mainstream breed of Manticore had the head of a human, the body of a lion, and the tail of a scorpion that would kill anyone instantly with its sting. A Manticore's skin repelled all known charms, so it was extremely difficult to subdue a Manticore with magic. It was known to be capable of human speech and had intelligence comparable to a Being, however, due to its extreme aggressiveness towards humans, it was considered a sentient beast. The Manticore sang softly as it ate its prey. - ApprenticeDaoist2mthReplied to lil_yumeCh 125 Sudden Friend
- ApprenticeDaoist3mthReplied to Kw0z
Although that is partly right the mc knows that the guy he transmigrated to was always trying to suck up to her and get her attention through any means possible. So even without those memories he knows who he is currently in and what he did prior so it is unreasonable to expect the girl to believe that the annoying guy that follows her around everywhere would suddenly not care about her and treat her as nothing but air without suspecting some ulterior motive.
"However, I don't know why Miss Yan is so angry that she keeps showing me a scowling face as if I owe you money." - ApprenticeDaoist6mthReplied to indiferente
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Shipwrecks and dead bodies floated all across the oceans dying in red. - ApprenticeDaoist7mthReplied to flssdd
I think that treating her as a prostitute is not about having to pay her but only using her for her body, and not about her body count either.
'Damn woman, don't think I will ever treat you as more than a prostitute!' - ApprenticeDaoist7mthReplied to AbysmalMelody
No he said that it could be taken as being racist not that he thinks the author was being racist.
It cannot happen. [The main character and the villain are like two colors: white and black; even if you do nothing, the main character will still hate you and try to kill you.] - ApprenticeDaoist7mthReplied to AbysmalMelody
Chill with the personal atacks for such a minor thing, the guy just said that it could be interpreted as racism (even if it isnt). Its a completely fair statement and he clearly said that he knows its not how it was intended but could very easily be misinterpreted as that.
It cannot happen. [The main character and the villain are like two colors: white and black; even if you do nothing, the main character will still hate you and try to kill you.] - ApprenticeDaoist7mthReplied to Ball_Shaving_Gu
If your frienship is fragile enough that a acusation like that is enough to finish it i dont think you have a friend
Wang Lin offered a conciliatory smile, patting Qin Chen on the shoulder. "It's alright, Brother Qin. I understand how valuable that treasure was to you. Let's pretend this never happened," he suggested, his words sincere. - ApprenticeDaoist11mthReplied to Djbomber
It should have said a minority can learn, as in only a small amount of people can regardless if race
The only difference in this world is that Arcane Studies exists… Although only minorities can learn them, it still greatly shows how different this place was compared to his previous Earth. - ApprenticeDaoist1yrReplied to 69PAIN69
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[Buckler - 1 unit] - ApprenticeDaoist1yrReplied to Pikachu_1233
Closest would probably be Hifumi but doenst seem like her that much
[Layla Adriana Tarmias]