ZeN0N
College Student majoring in Art & Design, Someone who loves fantasy stories, Part-time writer.
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ZeN0N8mthCommentedCh 3 Spark of Revenge- ZeN0N8mthCommented
Its master duh
"It should be me who asks you the question, Guardian. I don't know who was here first, but, who is she to you?" Sorath muttered. - ZeN0N8mthCommented
Oh? A novel character found out he is a novel character! noice
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What a way to start a story
BOOM!!! - ZeN0N11mthCommented
I can't help but imagine this place to one in Skyrim
At the highest point of the mountain, a vast expanse of flat rock was covered with snow. In the center of it, illuminated by moonlight, stood a magnificent temple. Its colossal columns and walls were cut from black marble, with exquisite reliefs decorating the stygian pediment and broad frieze. Beautiful and awesome, it looked like a palace of a dark god. - ZeN0N11mthCommented
It's a newbie mistake, don't worry Sunless, you still have an MC buff!
He had no chance against the enemy in a direct confrontation, at least not without an advantage. Bloodbane poison was supposed to be his hidden card, but turned out to be nearly useless. Being able to see in the dark did not help that much, too: somehow, Hero was able to perceive their surroundings even without any light. - ZeN0N11mthReplied to fox_silver
Maybe? Well, imagine, if you're a cat will you kiss a rat? I guess no. But, at least cats do eat or catch rats
"Why are you so quiet, rat? Cat got your tongue? Oh right, I'm the cat." - ZeN0N11mthCommented
After re-reading this now I'm sure MC is a schizo
"Talking to myself?" - ZeN0N11mthReplied to Tylor_Roney
Nah, the MC is a schizo 😅
Just as he assumed, no matter how long someone was taking the test inside the room, it'd be a minute–exactly 60 seconds when they came out of the room. - ZeN0N11mthReplied to _TheProphet
Nah, it's just showing that he has personality and I think it's good to have a monologue or narration like this for 1st pov
In order to take the exam peacefully without anyone bothering me, I had to do this. Hiding my face from the female predator who was thirsty for a handsome guy. - ZeN0N11mthReplied to Jackson_frost
Hey, the Author can't help but do this for *word counts* 😂
The last two realms were Wolf and Owl, these two realms were located side-by-side, a few kilometers away from the dormitories. The Wolf realm was the student space, where the buildings of student clubs were located. Lastly the Owl realm, as the Owl was an animal symbolized wisdom and knowledge, the grandiose building resembled a castle was built there, the Grand Library of Octagram. - ZeN0N11mthReplied to Kaiser_6117
IDK maybe he's a psycho or an S lol
I had so many questions I wanted to ask him right away, but I guess it could wait until we killed all of these monsters. And so I gave him a fake smile and said - ZeN0N1yrCommented
Ayo? She said she's the cat and called Zio a rat. So she got the Zio's tongue meant that she kissed him? 🧐
"Why are you so quiet, rat? Cat got your tongue? Oh right, I'm the cat." - ZeN0N1yrCommented
This sentence and the next one are inconsistent with tenses. Doesn't > Didn't Is > Was
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Oh? It's F minus, right? It's a bit unusual to place the minus sign before the letter xD
►Rank: -F grade - ZeN0N1yrCommented
I thought 180 cm is tall... cuz mine only 172 cm 😞
This paragraph has been deleted. - ZeN0N1yrCommentedThus, with that, it marked the end of today's Combat Training class, as well as the end of my story.