AkitoTakahashi
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A potential start for sure. The story opens with a funny blend of things, mainly because the initial chapters introduced us to the clumsy yet charming MC, Alastor. Interesting way of balancing The author skillfully balances light-hearted moments with sinister ones, author. I'm not into magic, but it's clear that plot is likely to unfold with some intriguing story-telling. Be prudent, because it's shaping up to be a long one. You'll understand what I mean after chapter one.
We’ve gone ahead and made the changes. Thank you.
Not all chapters have been proofread, sir. But thank you for pointing this out. It's been fixed.
"What if our lives are just a story written by another?" An intriguing concept. Micheal seems oblivious to the strange occurrences around him, which makes a greater starter. The writing style is energetic, with humorous inner monologues from Micheal and his friends. Almost every chapter ends abruptly which is great for suspense.
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Haha. Yes, we remember that scene. Kiyomu was named after the director and storyboard artist of the series. Our main reason for not adding him in is because it would be too easy for the MC. But we greatly appreciate the suggestion.
Shameless review here. Greetings everyone. Path of War both is and isn't your typical adventure story. Arthur Bennet, our main protagonist, is a devout Christian. This alone is enough to tell you there will be quotes taken directly from the King James Version Bible. It's important to note from the outset that this isn't anime fan fiction. To be exact, it's not fan fiction at all. While the setting is based on the popular Naruto franchise, the story takes a sharp turn into a brutal survival tale. Once our main character participates in a groundbreaking VR experience offered by Elysium, a high-tech company, his excitement quickly fades as he discovers a horrifying truth: the pain within the simulation is agonizingly real, despite assurances of a light pain response. Now thrown into this virtual prison, he's going to try his best to escape by becoming the world's main villain. The story as a whole is crafted as a suspenseful narrative that explores the dark side of virtual reality as well as man's true evil nature. We see the main character grappling with this new world, forced to adapt and fight for survival in a world that's foreign to him. If you're looking for a lighthearted adventure, this story isn't for you. However, if you enjoy thrillers with a touch of science fiction and an anti-hero protagonist thrust into extraordinary circumstances, then this might be a book worth checking out. Just be prepared for excellent story-telling and multiple characters to help drive the plot. Last but not least, please, for what sanity is left in this world, read the preface!
An interesting story, mate. While I may not be the "magic-type," I had to write your novel a review. An interesting sci-fi tale, to say the least. The idea of a living earth and power-hungry constellations create a unique backdrop for a struggle. Marcus also has a relatable element, grappling with those abilities amidst you gave him. A lot of questions to ask, but intriguing nonetheless.
While we're impressed by your knowledge, all of these things have already been taken into account. From the most subtle of weapons to the most dangerous techniques, the story will continue unfolding, with Arthur seeking after what he can. For that reason, we'll try to keep things spoiler-free by stating that one of those you listed is what he's going after soon. The story is a very long one. Hence, MC isn't running around with things like the Rinnegan by the fiftieth chapter, as seen in other stories. P.S. Wizened, because of your gradual support, you were mentioned in one of the upcoming chapters. 👍
Hahahaha. This put a big smile on our faces 😂
Yes. Paragraph 46.