It's interesting but well the 'pink' hair Makima is disturbing my reading experience because we know it was not pink. And I see you try to make the MC have the same personality as Gojo Satoru but it comes out so suddenly and stupidly.

I understand this is fan fiction but the amount of nonsense in this chapter makes my interest reading this novel gone entirely. it's better for you to make a time skip rather than something like this. truly disappointing.