Not an easy book to read. Odd uses of language throughout the book, the wrong word often used, such as 'he' when you meant 'she' or just a completely wrong word. However the overall storyline and characters were interesting. So much so I wanted to read till the end. Unfortunately once the climax of the story was reached the story abruptly ended. Even if there is a second book, no story should end that soon after the climax. It just leaves disappointment not the need for more. lastly, what was the need for continuous 'collapsing in tears' ? The main character cried every 5 minutes, then other characters were at it! Difficult emotional descriptions were definitely needed.

One thing I don't understand.....why does Alpha Edwards sleep around? he has a mate. Even if they are not fated mates I thought once bonded (by bite) they both would not be interested in others. As for Marcy I can't help feeling sorry for her. She is a pampered princess and definitely unkind, but considering how she has been treated by her parents I'm not surprised she is acting like she is. Amazing story btw! definitely the best I've ever read.