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But that fact that he killed people for robbing a store which would give them at most a few hundred dollars but now he stealing millions from people and may even ruin their life it just doesn't fit the persona you seem to be building
The system is interesting and I can kind of understand petunia trying to distance herself from Harry so she does not have to feel the pain again but Harry's kindness and the fact that he is supposed to be able to be manipulative is kind of disjointed for me
Just say Tiamat form
didn't you say the family name is Dumas and mc last name is dauge
Has potential but I'll wait until 10 chap to review
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