TheBlackstar
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TheBlackstar20dCommentedYou are now one of my esteemed employees !š±
"What I'm saying is, you don't have to serve me as much anymore. You volunteered to work for me until death, but I do not want that for you, Sephora," she explained. "You've shown me your loyalty, and I want to treat you accordingly. That's why I want you here in this palace, not as my handmaid, but as a future member of my court."- TheBlackstar20dCommented
Sounds like an elf name, Iām calling it!!
He chuckled and took Aiyana's hand, saying, "This is my wife, Sylvanwee," then gesturing to me, he added, "She is her handmaid." - TheBlackstar21dReplied to The_Vntage_PenCh 7 Meeting the president
- TheBlackstar21dReplied to The_Vntage_PenCh 3 The Crimson Phoenix
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I love orlas country accent so much-
"Is this not to your likin', Your Highness?" Orla asked and got an instant hiss from Melisandre. - TheBlackstar21dCommented
Is this a GL?
I watched as her pacing grew more intense by the second, I watched as she kept moving back and forth soliloquizing. I have never seen her this much agitated, her well manicured fingers kept running through her light ginger hair as she kept bumping into furniture occasionally and wincing at the pain. Each time she does, I rush to her but she just waves me away and goes back to pacing. - TheBlackstar1mthReplied to DaoistTct9Uh
Thank you! I try to implement real life physics/ science into this novel
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- TheBlackstar6mthCommentedCh 29 Chapter 29: soul seed Konquerors
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JJBA reference?
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The story is pretty good so far, I like the good old fashioned magic power system and races, the pacing is pretty good too. Iām also writing something similar to your work feel free to check it out!
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Probably idk but still pretty good
This book has been deleted. - TheBlackstar6mthReplied to Celestial_Blood917
Same here but I just do it in teaching or revealing moments
The first 40 chapters may contain a lot of info dumps. With me being relatively new at this, a lot of info dumps happened. Not going to lie, before I started writing I didn't even know this term existed. That's how bad it is.