This chapter was totally unpleasant.

I honestly didn't expect anything from this fic and it still disappointed me.

Créeme respeto mucho este fic pero igual me quedaré con un mal sabor de boca ya que aunque es la Lily niña sigue siendo esa que tomó la decisión, entonces nada cambia para mi, solo que es podría hacerlo otra vez esas es mi imagen sobre esta Lily

That's how I'll say it, it's one of the best Harry Potter fan fic but if you forgive Lily just like that, I think it's the worst thing you can do, I would only forgive this Lily if everything she said about the relationship with James is false and it doesn't happen He still gives and it's only to try to forget Red or make him jealous, otherwise I think that he stays with a Lily who made him an NTR is the worst and the story would be ruined

Así lo dire es uno de los mejores fan fic de Harry Potter pero si perdonas a Lily solo asi yo creo que es lo peor que puedes hacer, solo perdonaría a esta Lily si todo lo que dijo de la relación con James es falsa y no pasa da todavía y sólo es para intenta olvidar a red o darle celos sino creo que que se quede con una Lily que le hizo un NTR es lo pero y se arruinaría la histori

I don't know but I don't think it captures Gilgamesh's personality well since he doesn't have any arrogance or pride, he almost asks for help or permission for everything.