The beginning is very promising for me. I really like this story. the writing is also pretty good and I hope to continue. The author keep up the good work.

Good job

Normal

thanks for the chapter.

Good

Good

thanks for the chapter.

Good

well, we are waiting for the continuation

yes. the chapter came out long, but as for me, this is a plus, I read a work where there are much more words per chapter. So I don't think long chapters are bad

ok thanks for the warning. we will wait after March 17

like he has a renaissance quirk or not. I still don't understand

Solomon is a masculine Hebrew name derived from the Hebrew. שלום (Solomon (Latin), Shloime (Yiddish), Shlomo (Hebrew), Shlomo, from Shalom — "peace", meaning not war), as well as "שלם" (shalem — "perfect", "whole"). In the Russian Empire, a Helmet variant was often used. Among the Jews of Eastern Europe, the common form of the name Solomon was the name Zalman, less common is such a variant of the name as Zelman. The Arabic equivalent of the name Solomon is the name Suleiman. The name Solomon has its roots in the Hebrew language. It came from the name of Shlomo, which, in turn, is formed from the name "Shalom", which in Russian has the translation "mir". Thus, the name Solomon acquires the meaning of "peaceful". There is also a different interpretation of the name — "whole" or "perfect". Short versions of the name Solomon: Monya, Solonya. Affectionate address to Solomon: Solomonushka, Solomonchik, Monechka, Solomonka. Solomon is a masculine Hebrew name derived from the Hebrew. שלום (Solomon (Latin), Shloime (Yiddish), Shlomo (Hebrew), Shlomo, from Shalom — "peace", meaning not war), as well as "שלם" (shalem — "perfect", "whole"). In the Russian Empire, a Helmet variant was often used. Among the Jews of Eastern Europe, the common form of the name Solomon was the name Zalman, less common is such a variant of the name as Zelman. The Arabic equivalent of the name Solomon is the name Suleiman. The name Solomon has its roots in the Hebrew language. It came from the name of Shlomo, which, in turn, is formed from the name "Shalom", which in Russian has the translation "mir". Thus, the name Solomon acquires the meaning of "peaceful". There is also a different interpretation of the name — "whole" or "perfect". Short versions of the name Solomon: Monya, Solonya. Affectionate address to Solomon: Solomonushka, Solomonchik, Monechka, Solomonka. Related nameforms: Suleiman, Zalman, Zelman. Church variant of the name: Solomon. Patronymics that will be given to the heirs of Solomon: Patronymics that will be given to the heirs of Solomon: Solomonovna, Solomonovich. What patronymics are organically combined with the name Solomon: Andreevich, Borisovich, Davydovich, Markovich, Yurievich. In the Orthodox there is one saint named Solomon — this is the prophet Solomon, the king of Israel. He was the third king in the kingdom of Israel, who ascended the throne at the age of twelve. He reigned for forty years. Solomon had great power, which extended to all neighboring states. The saint was a very rich and wise man, all the kings tried to learn from him. The tsar died peacefully, leaving behind a great legacy in the form of written works. Solomon is the owner of a quick mind, curiosity, kind disposition and strong character. He is a bright and original person, endowed with self-confidence and reasonableness. A man easily has others around him. He is prone to sharpness and straightforwardness, reacts sharply to the wrong actions of other people. With friends, the guy shows himself as a loyal and reliable friend who knows how to listen and support in difficult times. Thanks to this skill and kindness, the young man has many friends and acquaintances. Solomon has both impressionability and vulnerability. Courage in character hides a tender soul. The guy is always open to people, happy to help and give good advice. At the same time, he reacts very sensitively to sharp jokes in his direction, although he has a good sense of humor. It is quite easy to offend or deceive such a person. He responds to unpleasant situations with impulsiveness, but never shows aggressiveness. Has a good intuition.Patronymics that will be given to the heirs of Solomon: Solomonovna, Solomonovich. What patronymics are organically combined with the name Solomon: Andreevich, Borisovich, Davydovich, Markovich, Yurievich. In the Orthodox there is one saint named Solomon — this is the prophet Solomon, the king of Israel. He was the third king in the kingdom of Israel, who ascended the thr

I like this story. It's a good start. The plot develops normally. So far I have not seen any shortcomings. Therefore, I hope everything will continue to go in the same narrative.

I like this story. We need more chapters.

Good