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Shiroyukihime10mthReplied to Assnkneepads- Shiroyukihime10mthReplied to Darkness_Enjoyer
he is getting other girls when he was supposed to focus on revenge, Also it feels like sometimes though dialogues that MC still yearns for the villains. Also its so slow bro , what do mean i look like a reader who focuses on the main plotline????? U know you have to buy those chapters right????? and it cost me a lot to buy all those chapters upto the academy arc starts and in those unlocked chapters there is no trace of the main plotline.......... Which feels i am unlocking all those chapters for Filler chapters. All those chapters you wrote before the academy arc every thing can be summarized in 2-3 chapters and readers will feel like they missed nothing. Nothing important.
detailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer - Shiroyukihime10mthReplied to Darkness_Enjoyer
The MC feels beta cause i read like what 140 chapters?? i forgot but you know you can end a volume in those chapters right and in those chapters there are no revenge stuff going on. MC feels like a push over and the power gain is so painful slow that its get all the attraction out of the novel.
detailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer - Shiroyukihime10mthReplied todetailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
- Shiroyukihime10mthReplied to Novlover
Exactly first volume seems mostly fillers, so if u have to reach volume to to keep consumer interested then we all can guess how interesting of a novel it is.
detailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer - Shiroyukihime10mthReplied to iTridedetailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
- Shiroyukihime10mthReplied to Dark0minddetailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
- Shiroyukihime10mthReplied to lolbingolol
the training arc can be good when its interesting enough , there is nothing interesting or important enough. You can just skip it to academy and you will still get whats going on and that he got few extra romance members. All those training are can be simply put in one chapter.
detailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer - Shiroyukihime10mthPosted
very uninteresting and very bad read experience , most of the chapters feels like fillers. Nothing short of revenge are in like 100 chapters. MC seems like a beta. Instead of focusing on the main heroines and the main plot MC goes away to get other girls.
detailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer - Shiroyukihime1yrReplied to ShadowYuki