Pretty unique setting, glad the author has left his comfort zone. I’ve never seen a godfather fanfic on here,I’m really exited to see more and where this is headed.

I think him stealing other people’s songs is kind of scummy, you don’t need to create a whole song just the idea behind it.

Completely copied Robbin Hobbs assassin’s apprentice book, such a weird thing to copy into a cultivation novel. Basically stole the characters and story after the initial introduction. It’s like you renamed hogwarts and changed Harry potters name but it’s still the same story.

Characters and plot are good and the writing is decent. But the power system in this novel is simply a mess! And it ruins the whole novel. Cultivation, martial spirits, soul rings from beasts like in Douluo Dalu, even heart blades that are somehow different from martial spirits. The mc goes up in realms really quickly and it never describes the characteristics of each realm or how powerful that realm is.

Why is he even arguing with this shrew? just kill her already! He’s got godlike powers while she’s just an average woman, he’s obviously not going to convince her of anything so why bother?

I considered removing this from my library because I thought it was dropped, glad I didn’t.

He realised he made a mistake immediately and even said he regretted it.

God there is so much author explanations and recaps that there is hardly an actual novel if you stripped it all away.

I hate it when authors do this breaking the fourth wall thing, it's jarring and cringeworthy.

Probably too late but divination would be perfect for mc, he can calculate all variables with his heightened intelligence.

I hate it when authors do this, if you're not going to post a chapter then don't post the chapter, Why make a notice like this, all it does is make me click thinking there's a new release and get annoyed when we see a message like this.

Don’t listen to the haters this is well written and the concept is cool as hell, fanfics for this anime a practically nonexistent so thx for bringing it to us.

You should try to improve your writing and actually write more than 4 chapters before dropping a story and then maybe people would be more willing to give you money for your "hobby".

I just don't think you're good/dedicated enough at writing to expect to be paid for your work.

Don't listen to him author, it's a cool plot. I like how mc is able to rectify some of his "mistakes" and grow by taking in a disciple similar to him.

I think it's fine, the author has created a completely original fanfic. Most harry potter fanfics follow the story religiously, he is only using the same universe.

Forgot about that, we haven't seen the ocean since the first chapter. I don't have a map of Pandora in my head, in my mind a savanna should be more inland.

I thought he was in the middle of a jungle/savanna nowhere near the sea?

Found the whole scenario where he was cucked and his girlfriend slept with another man unnecessary and kinda gross. Like the author went on and on about how she turned the senses off and that he was basically having s*x with a s*x doll, but rather than reassuring me, it just painted a really unpleasant picture in my head. Like with how much backtracking the author did you can tell he didn't want the mc to be cucked , so why put it in the story? And even if she didn't feel anything the dude still had s*x with a perfect replica of his girlfriend which is still gross.

No, it's really good. I was just surprised at how much effort you put into the translation, researching etc, you went beyond what I expect for a translation, in a good way it improves the experience. thx