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Characters and plot are good and the writing is decent. But the power system in this novel is simply a mess! And it ruins the whole novel. Cultivation, martial spirits, soul rings from beasts like in Douluo Dalu, even heart blades that are somehow different from martial spirits. The mc goes up in realms really quickly and it never describes the characteristics of each realm or how powerful that realm is.
He realised he made a mistake immediately and even said he regretted it.
I think it's fine, the author has created a completely original fanfic. Most harry potter fanfics follow the story religiously, he is only using the same universe.