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nobita is becoming little by little like his old self in ch-12 he was like he only cared about his close one in ch-22 he becoming like his old self. make him more OC and skipping his training is a good or bad plot hole you you deside . to left my final conclousion of writing this comment is to express more deployment on nobita character and make him more ooc. And good writing this story Best of luck
you writing is quite good i only feel you should add more characters for movie and other work of Fujiko F. Fujio and write more stable besides that this book is good
lord Ganesha