this is starting to feel like an AI made story now with all the superficial way of narration

mc is just dumb af,..made the situation worse in every fight compared to original

One of the best well thought out novels till now..was a little shaky at the beginning with some grammatical errors but after 10-20 chapters, it improved drastically..Love the storyline and Marvel introduction..Hope the updates keep coming because I'm hooked for the long run.. Great work Author ❤️✊

Loving the story till now and the direction in which it's going ...recommend to anyone even if they are not that familiar with modern family

+1 parineeti chopra

+1 buying stocks idea would work better

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+1...don't Nerf him just make him come into his form in a few games..don't make it like he is just scoring centuries from the first game..make it like he is scoring 30-40 runs in the beginning and learning from his mistakes ..( just some suggestions ...still would love to follow the story if you don't take them into consideration )

Don't make him do movies .i think it will divert him from the plot..if you want suggestions read the greatest of all time names webnovel..it's based on football but the storyline might help you in framing the story better

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ok👍.. keep up the good work..love ths story🖤

although the story and writing is good i must say you are over sensationalizing the script too much...you don't need to use that many adjectives to describe a simple ball and play.. except that the story is fantastic so far.. keep up the work man👍