Everything is fine not perfect but fine and readable. The only thing which I don't like about this novel is the over explanation of each and everything. Like explaining is part of world building and that's good. But over-explaining defeats the purpose. I just skip when the explanation goes too long. So yea, keep the explanation short.

One star for not updating Dual cultivation you money hungry freak. It's like I wasted my money on those chapters. It would have been better to just read the pirated version. And that's what I will do from now on.

Everything is good, except the chapter update time. It's like the author has already dropped the story after milking the money out of it. I had my suspicions that this is gonna end abruptly without any proper ending. Author already showed the signs of this in the chapters just before Divine heavens arc. Anyways let's just move on.

so true