Thanks for a good chapt er

Great story really like Grace character

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Very smart I would not have thought to ask that

Great progress

Great chapter very funny

You forgot to give him the speech never point it at someone in your ready to shoot and kill them😵

The story is getting better as I continue read honestly I hope it continues at this pace. Thanks for the chapter

The continents thing doesn’t make much sense because his dad was rich so I’m sure he would be in contact with some of the upper class and if he knows about boats and ships being a kid there is no way he hasn’t aks any questions about it. Great story so far though just a couple little things here and there. One more question though his dad did not own any books at all? Even in those time they might be expensive but come on he should have had some and as a kid he should have checked a couple out right even if he couldn’t read them he could ask what there about.

He doesn’t know how to read or write anything by seven years old when he was living a pretty good life till his mother died when he was five? Never read a bedtime story as much as his parents supposedly loved him? That part doesn’t make to much sense as he should be able to read something’s as well as write very little, being realistic even in that day and age or else what he do till five years old with all that time?

You have a very good fan base, you can tell by the comments they leave.

It was good to see you got better, though I’m leaving this comment a long time after the fact.

Appreciate the chapter

Appreciate all the notices you post author.

Ouch 🤕 very painful 😣

Appreciate you asking the readers what they thought about the word count in the chapters that cost.

Great work, love the story so far.

Very upset with this harsh trial compared to the other trials🤬 Which are a cakewalk in comparison😡 me upset😤

WARNING SMALL SPOILER IN THIS REVIEW KIND OF BUT NOT REALLY IM CONFUSED BY MY OWN THOUGHTS My review is going to be about the prologue of the first 30+ chapters. I was very hesitant to read the the book and the more I read the more I liked the mc which made me more hesitant, why you ask because from tags I looked at before reading the book I saw reincarnation which meant the mc would die😿 sad I know me too. My dislike for the author for killing my boy ryu cannot be put into words😡🤬😤 With that said great story so far really caused me some heart ache. At first I questioned why are was hesitant to use his eye to see which that he could not see, that is until he died. Ps. By the way I’m not that smart so bear with me here. Now I’m going to take a guess that mc instinctively knew he was going die should he take that step leaving his family to defend for themselves in the upcoming storm, but I think after reading about the death phenix and the trials he also saw a chance knowing he would die after using his abilities he completed the trial of sacrifice but also might his family a chance to survive the upcoming storm. Hence the suffering and dilemma of the right choice to make. In conclusion mc was no coward. Now I may be all wrong so read up and tell me your take😼 ps. This might be my longest comment ever🤔though there are a lot of spaces.

So far it’s been a great read, the only complaint I have which isn’t really a complaint is we need more chapters. It’s been a long time since I’ve seen any good reads on qidian so 👍🏾 to the authors appreciate the work and keep it up! 🥷🏾💨