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PolerineGirl1yrReplied to Rem_dragon_mammayeah! Darn agony!
Chapter 5- PolerineGirl1yrCommented"No!" the mage cried, both arms spread wide. "You cannot leave!"
- PolerineGirl1yrCommentedThe viscount Lord Triton set off with ten of his men in tow. From his vantage point at the top of the hill, Riftan watched the man who had changed his life ride away like the wind without so much as a glance back.
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ohhh...
Riftan's efforts proved to be in vain, as Maximilian soon slipped out of the banquet hall with her maidservants. It was almost as if she were expressing her disdain for the deplorable spectacle. - PolerineGirl1yrCommented
Really?
"You must." Hebaron's face broke into a satisfied grin, and he slammed down a goblet of ale in front of Riftan. "When you officially become commander, I pledge to treat you with the utmost respect." - PolerineGirl1yrCommented
You'll understand some day Hebaron...
Hebaron clicked his tongue. "Anyone would think we'd lost. Why the long face?" - PolerineGirl1yrCommented
Ahh... now I understand... he's being paying attention for so long to every single detail...
He surreptitiously watched her popping grapes in her mouth one at a time until he felt his throat burn with thirst. Grabbing his goblet, he gulped down wine. Every time he saw her, she somehow seemed more beautiful than the last. It pained him to even look at her. With a troubled sigh, he called for a servant to refill his goblet. - PolerineGirl1yrCommentedThe banquet hall was decorated more extravagantly than ever, and an abundance of dishes involving all kinds of rare fruits and spices filled the tables. Riftan twisted his lips as he watched the duke seated on the dais. The man had been nothing but domineering during the discussions. He now seemed to be making merry conversation with Dristan's messengers, who were seated next to him. Riftan found it laughable. Looking further down, he felt his disgust evaporate as his gaze fell on Maximilian sitting demurely beside her father.
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I want to see Maxi again!!!
He cracked open the pane to scour the area of the grounds where he knew Maximilian frequently strolled. Then, leaning against the wall, he breathed a sigh. He felt as though he had aged three years in just a few months. With another weary exhale, he turned away to lie on his bed. - PolerineGirl1yrCommented"I come with a message from His Majesty," Riftan coldly declared to the head steward, who rushed over to meet them.
- PolerineGirl1yrCommentedAs he carefully watched from a distance, the figure turned around, a curtain of red hair spilling over her black robes. Riftan froze. It could only be Maximilian Croyso.
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I'm just thinking about Maxi ♡♡♡
Noticing Riftan's discomfort, Triton raised a brow. "What's the matter? Do you have something to say about my orders?" - PolerineGirl1yrCommented
I was thinking about that!
1) I know no one reads too deeply into smut but here she didn't rotate her hand 360° to touch his head. In the raws, there's a space before this paragraph signifying scenery change (well rather than scenery change, it's more like 'some time later') - PolerineGirl1yrCommented
He is my favorite!
"I hear you are His Majesty's favorite." - PolerineGirl1yrCommented
what would he have done if he weren't interrupt
Sipping his wine, Riftan surreptitiously studied her. Could she be ill? Her face was ghostly white, and her eyes appeared dull as though they concealed her true feelings. He had hoped to see her bright smile one last time. Feeling both disappointed and concerned, he shifted in his seat. - PolerineGirl1yrCommented
oh, i love it too!
"I do love your insolence." - PolerineGirl1yrCommented
such a brave boy! Daring to stop Riftan Calypse!
"Eight." - PolerineGirl1yrCommented
what would have happened if she stayed? He would talk with her? he would ask harshly if she remembered him?
"You have greeted all our guests. Why don't you rest in your chambers now?" - PolerineGirl1yrCommented
I'll take care of you Riftan... come with me
A profound sense of dejection flooded Riftan. The fantasy he had cherished for the past decade crumbled like a sandcastle before him. The memory of rescuing her was what had kept him going, but now the girl he had saved refused to even look at him. He felt like the world's biggest fool.