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H3LI0S

H3LI0S

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2022-08-22 JoinedGlobal
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    H3LI0S4mth
    Replied to Heavens_Equal

    no ,I just temporarily remove the chapters that involved Michael Morningstar because readers find them too confusing and add some new chapters. So I just delay Morningstar appearance, nothing more

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    Replied to Hasibul_Hasan

    Drop it? not a chance. Even when no one reading it, I will keep writing it. Thank you for your support.

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    Replied to Hasibul_Hasan

    kinda busy these days and I'm trying to save chapters for future stable release. I'm trying to do it as quickly as possible, sorry for that.

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    Replied to HiroHeartlands

    well then you are not all wrong, I do use some help of chat gpt to translate some parts from my native language, but it only appear in early chapter. I also realize gpt uses too much flowery words so the later chapter wont make the same mistake

    This is my first time writing a fight scene, and I hope I did well.
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    Replied to HiroHeartlands

    No, ChatGPT sucks at anything involving fights, jokes, or adult scenes. It won't generate content containing violence. But why do you ask, was this fight scene that bad?

    This is my first time writing a fight scene, and I hope I did well.
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    H3LI0S4mth
    Replied to Shukaku_Enjoyer

    Don't be sad , I only talk about the human DNA, he won't get Clancy monster's form, but he still need to turn into Alien to use Alien's power.

    Another piece of good news was that I possessed a unique genetic trait that allowed my body to selectively assimilate and integrate specific elements from the DNA I absorbed. This trait acted as a natural filter, enabling my body to recognize and process only desirable genetic information while discarding any unwanted alterations to my physical appearance. This meant I wouldn't have to transform into the appearance of other individuals to use their abilities.
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    Replied to Taya_Sama

    Yes

    "The day we went to the water park, the place where you were captured belongs to the Forever Knight, a faction from Europe," he replied.
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    H3LI0S4mth
    Replied to Shukaku_Enjoyer

    sadly no 😔

    Another piece of good news was that I possessed a unique genetic trait that allowed my body to selectively assimilate and integrate specific elements from the DNA I absorbed. This trait acted as a natural filter, enabling my body to recognize and process only desirable genetic information while discarding any unwanted alterations to my physical appearance. This meant I wouldn't have to transform into the appearance of other individuals to use their abilities.
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    Replied to Taya_Sama

    Yes, it is quite versatile. I have found many uses for it.

    "The day we went to the water park, the place where you were captured belongs to the Forever Knight, a faction from Europe," he replied.
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    Replied to The_Puffer

    Agree , they are awesome.

    "The day we went to the water park, the place where you were captured belongs to the Forever Knight, a faction from Europe," he replied.
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    Replied to The_Immortal_Beast

    this is an AU. And Max is not lying to the kid

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    Replied to Hasibul_Hasan

    he loves his old family or at least not hate them. Kevin is an Osmosian - human subspecies from unknown origin, not an alien race like in af/uaf.

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    Replied to Lennon_Leadbetter

    thank you for both your compliment and your idea, that is a great idea.

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    Replied to Lennon_Leadbetter

    yes , of course, totally.

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    Replied to Hasibul_Hasan

    I know , but that is the main canon, I already said that this is an AU. And there are many flawed and retcon moments in the main canon, so it kinda impossible to follow it completely

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    Replied to Lucas_Oliveira_2302

    that will be cool, maybe a mandalorian MC, but I don't know much about and unique and powerful tech from Star for combat that doesnt involve jedi stuff, so maybe borrow tech from other verse

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    Replied to Lucas_Oliveira_2302

    well, in that case, my answer is .I don't know :))

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    Replied to Drojam

    thank you

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    Replied to Lucas_Oliveira_2302

    danmachi ? yes. fate? no. I don't know where to start, and people say the lore is complicated. Is it good

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    Replied to Lucas_Oliveira_2302

    I think i might choose Korra ,that world seem easier to write about, but i still need to watch it first

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