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dreamless_08003mthCommentedCh 8 A Suffocating Checkmate- dreamless_08003mthCommented
you could do this math for it I have done the same in my novel 200 + ( intelligent stat x 92) but this is if you want his mana to grow really quickly you can lower the 92 to something a little more reasonable
AN: Guys I'm having a crisis rn the mechanics of the gamer system are a bit messed up like the relation between INT and MP I'm doing 10MP for 1INT, but Jihan in the Manhwa had 65.5 points and 900MP the next chapter it became 2000MP like wtf. Then the author abandons the MP system and just makes the MC have infinite mana. If you have any ideas, please let me know in the comments. - dreamless_08003mthReplied to omnkinesis
that's fair I started writing this for fun trying to improve my writing skills but was like why not see people's reaction so i posted it if you do start writing try and get a friend to look over it, me and my friend have done the same before I would offer to look over your work but i'm just a stranger on the internet lol
Ch 2 Ch 2 training... - dreamless_08003mthReplied to omnkinesis
That's Fair lol I haven't read the comics but i have heard some things let's just say it's Limited somehow i planned on creating some world's the mc could travel to be twisted versions' of their original self like the All for one Rule's MHA Btw Thanks for the comment lol
Marvel comics - M+ Rank - dreamless_08004mthPosted
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keep up the great work I really like the story and how you've written it...
This book has been deleted. - dreamless_08008mthReplied to lilspinn
thank you I relize that a bit now ngl I'll change that probably when I do a rewrite of the series sorry if this leaves a bad taste in your mouth
"H... Henka how. did you know about my true identity and even young Midoriya's name as well? Never mind it doesn't matter how you have come forward; I expect your intentions are anything but mischievous or malevolent. I will let Nezu know before he mistakenly takes you for a multi-quirk using spy or a villain aiming for the upcoming generation..." - dreamless_08008mthReplied to XtrEEm
i fixed that thanks for pointing that out
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ha just you wait he will not for now though I think it's better for the character I believe should focus on his ability with poison control and precision while he will consume poison to boost the the potency later not yet sorry if that doesn't make sense
I would train underwater constantly trying to increase my physical strength, mass pressure resistance and increase my stamina and while in the forest I would do multiple exersizes while continously be using my other quirks like electrokenisis and or acidogensis creating and releasing very acidic posions and also controlling larger and larger amounts of electricity while researching other great ways on getting stronger.. hah it's going to be such a grueling experience but imagine the growth with these thoughts a devious smile adorned my face... - dreamless_08009mthReplied to XtrEEm
thank you for the advice I'll need put this to use
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yes he's able to toggle that my bad for not being specific
//...Quirk subset poison organ in development grant's the ability to excrete a posion through Salvia, nature of the posion depends on the poision the host interacts with or consumes and the Tier and Rank will allow you to adjust potency and or allow easier manipulation of the posion outside of the physical body ..// - dreamless_08001yrCommented
loving it so far
Thank you, I hope you will support me here because this is the first serious novel that I will make, I am new to this, so if there is something wrong, please let me know that I will improve through time :): ). - dreamless_08001yrCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: Forest and people
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- dreamless_08001yrCommentedCh 1 Flight With Wings and Taken To Hospital (Edited Again)