I'd honestly love to see the "Retribution" Chordeva received at some point in the future.

same

Thanks again for another great chapter!

Ah ok, that section makes more sense now.

To answer your questions the chapter was a very fun read, I think you did well. I could tell what was going on except for the section where she was conversing with the thing in her mind around where she grabbed the demons leg, I had a bit of trouble following who was speaking. I think the amount of interpersonal dialogue you have going on is good, you seem to increase and decrease the amount of dialogue that happens depending on what is happening chapter to chapter which I like.

Well that chapter was very intense, it gave me goose bumps. I feel kind of bad for the demon Aisha killed, but it had to be done. Very interested to see what happens with Sui and who the name engraved on her body is from.

No! Not momma Lyn!

I'm not the greatest at putting stuff into words so I'll just say it how I can, I think this is a really fun story to read, the characters are great, the plot is interesting, even the little technical details keep me engaged. I really wish more people find this story and give it a shot, it's very underrated and I always look forward to another chapter.

I don't think the chapter was boring personally, I think these slow technical chapters can be important for fleshing out bits and pieces of information you wouldn't otherwise get to.