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DarkSamaIg11mthReplied to White_ClownAh mc did not reincarnate its his spirit soul that did will be explained in further chps. Possesing Yue Zhengyu is a good idea but here the main focus is on mc and his Spirit Soul. And yea the eye will have somn similar to spiritual detection.
Ch 2 The beginning.(2)- DarkSamaIg11mthReplied to CauliflowipzCh 16 Advanced Soul Tempering Guide.
- DarkSamaIg11mthCommentedCh 1 The beginning.(1)
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Xiao Yu (Young)
Xiao Yu possesses jet-black hair and striking crimson red eyes, reminiscent of his father, while his facial features bear a resemblance to his mother, making him a handsome child. - DarkSamaIg11mthReplied to CauliflowipzCh 16 Advanced Soul Tempering Guide.
- DarkSamaIg11mthReplied to CauliflowipzCh 16 Advanced Soul Tempering Guide.
- DarkSamaIg11mthReplied to Davidham_
There are hints i've given like: They have insane money cuz they are really big in food industry then why are they living in a city which is really not that important? How did they come to be the top in food industry? etc. Meaning they have their own circumstances. And they probably have to deal with it yes?
"Son, We would never do that. It's just that you are not strong enough so we cannot take you with us. Yuan'er you must always remember that in Soul Master societies Strength is what is most respected. I want you to work hard and become as strong as you can. Get close to people and find more people whom you can treasure." Lin Tian told Long Yuan while Mei gong hugged her son from behind, She was tearing up. - DarkSamaIg11mthCommented
This is Fei Ya
"Fei Ya, step forward. It's your turn next," Wong Wei instructed, diverting Long Yuan's focus. - DarkSamaIg11mthReplied to DarkSamaIgCh 15 The Letter...
- DarkSamaIg11mthCommentedCh 15 The Letter...
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Uh idk bruh this chap was edited hard so hard that even i think this is a bit sofisticated. if u guys feel uncomfortable with this writing style please let me know. Guys Review the fic , comment to let me know that you are present. Start sending dem stones btw ;)
Ch 15 The Letter... - DarkSamaIg11mthReplied to Winter_MetorCh 14 Moving forward.
- DarkSamaIg11mthReplied to Winter_MetorCh 14 Moving forward.
- DarkSamaIg11mthCommentedCh 13 Xiao.
- DarkSamaIg11mthCommentedCh 14 Moving forward.
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Bit of an info dump right there. Well this is kinda imp to build the story around so yeah. Hope chp was not dissapointing. Voting and reviewing the fic is appreciated and gives me more motivation to write. Also make sure to comment and gimme feedback. ;) Im take the story development slowly I dont want to rush this too much. Hope this does not bore u readers.
Ch 14 Moving forward. - DarkSamaIg11mthCommentedThey had apparently started to introduce themselves and noticed a young boy who was a bit taller than other people his age. The boy was wearing a white shirt with blank pants and a jacket on top. The boy was sipping his drink and looked relaxed contrary to the tense expression on other people's faces.
- DarkSamaIg11mthReplied to Seven_ShotCh 7 A fun time.