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GodXLuxifer6mthCommentedYou are using way to much future tense in the story where you should use present tenseshe 'would' come with tea and biscuits (it's sound *ucking stupid like you are seeing the future) why not write she entered the room while holding the tray of tea
Ch 6 Chapter 6: Learning about sects- GodXLuxifer8mthReplied to Reader_RillasCh 9 Chapter -09: The Broder War Starts
- GodXLuxifer8mthReplied to JetLord004
do same to mine
Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders. - GodXLuxifer8mthReplied to
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Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders. - GodXLuxifer8mthReplied to JetLord004
It dosesn't matter who does it first tell me what to write?
Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders. - GodXLuxifer8mthReplied to JetLord004
Sure 👍
Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders. - GodXLuxifer11mthReplied to SocialHippo
- GodXLuxifer11mthReplied to ZeN0N
- GodXLuxifer11mthReplied to Joao_Pires
War Horse is a Magical beast known for it's speed.
The county town of Rhine is located in the heart of the Rhine region. It is about a Thousand Kilometers away from the Nexus Territory. Riding a war horse for many days in a row. Rennes and others finally arrived at their destination smoothly. - GodXLuxifer11mthReplied to Yajin3004
He will surely I am thinking of giving him a profession where he can be Both Mage and Knight👍👍
[A/N: MC WILL USE LIGHT ATTRIBUTES SKILLS AND IN LATER CHAPTER HE WILL BECOME GOD OF LIGHT(maybe) I DON'T WANT TO USE SOME CLICH OR OVERUSED ATTRIBUTES LIKE TIME & SPACE, CHAOS, DESTRUCTION, SWORD ETC.] - GodXLuxifer11mthReplied to Jax_sama
No he will Not create a kingdom for now but After kingdom there are 5 Great Empire in the Dying Isle Island and there are Orc Empire, Elf Empire and many more Powerful force So you can guess about it but The kingdom of Lance will not be destroyed in the War But it will be destroyed due in another arc😉
Ch 19 Chapter -19: Viscount Family Perished. - GodXLuxifer11mthReplied to Joao_Pires
It's only building the wall as it will be more and more troublesome about writing building more wall in the future so i am writing the length of the wall of the later chapters after his town became more City or Capital👍
This paragraph has been deleted. - GodXLuxifer11mthReplied to Shadow5789
I don't know how to write lemons but i may try it in later chapter😉
This paragraph has been deleted. - GodXLuxifer11mthReplied to Joao_Pires
Well he will get more advance one in the future😗
This paragraph has been deleted. - GodXLuxifer11mthReplied to SirJuan_JuanCh 1 Chapter- 01: Return Home And Inheriting The Family
- GodXLuxifer11mthReplied to Spabsta
In cultivation novel where a person who cultivate immortality are called cultivator so i am asking what should i call those who are Warrior or Mage
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