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Al_12

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Rookie writer who managed to get his first novel contract!!! I like to use cliché topics but give them a unique twist even if it makes them more complex to write. I hope you can enjoy my novels :)

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to hot_papichulo

    Hello! Well, this will depend on several factors. I mean, in my original plan, each volume of my novel will last between 70 and 100 chapters. Each volume will take place in a different location because the protagonist will have to travel a lot. Depending on the support of the readers I will decide the number of total volumes. So I can't give you an exact number of chapters for now.

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    Al_121yr
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    Al_121yr
    Replied to Al_12

    For whoever is reading this, I am changing all narration perspectives to the third person to make it easier to read. From now on only characters will speak in the first person out loud or in their thoughts.

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to shockfoxx

    OK, thanks! I'll change it when I can and I'll also change some perspectives to the third person to make it easier to understand :)

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to Al_12

    Hmm, I'll try the option that takes me less time to edit all the chapters.

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to shockfoxx

    Thanks! I'm trying to figure out how to do it. I could use italics when the characters are narrating. I could also use [ ] or { } (the latter looks really bad xd). What do you think is better? Or do you have another idea? I was thinking of using the italic at the same time with [ ]

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to shockfoxx

    The person who came there for the inspection was Jones Beckett. Thomas is the head of the laboratory.

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to shockfoxx

    Thank you! :)

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to shockfoxx

    It is the narrator who is explaining everything from here. Thank you very much anyway! :)

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to shockfoxx

    I'll try to limit sudden changes in perspective between the main narrator and the characters in the future. The main narrator will always speak in the third person and the past tense. The narration of the characters usually appears after a character has some thoughts.

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to shockfoxx

    Here it is the same. It is Franz who is narrating this scene.

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to shockfoxx

    This was actually on purpose. Only the narrator speaks in the third person and in the past tense. In this scene it was Franz who was explaining something in his mind. Sometimes the characters explain certain things that they are doing at the moment (They are like a second narrator speaking in the first person).

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to shockfoxx

    Thank you so much! That would be very helpful :)

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to shockfoxx

    Thank you very much for the corrections! I don't have a proofreader so this is great for me :)

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to shockfoxx

    Thank you! I will modify the paragraph now :)

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to Suzuha_Yuu

    Thank you so much! I hadn't noticed my mistake. I will modify the paragraph now.

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to Thesilverderp

    For whoever reads this. I officially put the 'Harem' Tag in the novel.

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to Count_Fro

    Thank you for leaving a comment with your opinion. It makes me happy that you like my novel so far, I will continue to release chapters that I hope you and other readers enjoy :)

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to Count_Fro

    Yes, you're right. I tried to say that the verses were blasphemies from the point of view of Franz, a man from Earth (not from the pov of an inhabitant of the other world). I'll edit it later for better understanding. About Franz being a hypocrite... well, the Church of Light's religion clearly aims to exterminate the other races or anyone who has another religion, so it's hard for Franz to like that.

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    Al_121yr
    Replied to JustS0me0neFrench

    Anyway, thanks for leaving a comment. Any question or opinion motivates me to keep writing :) (especially the memes in some gif haha)

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