It does actually work if she means putting salt and other things in a jar to persevere it
I'm on chap 15 now, and I love it. It makes me question what will happen next without cliffhangers or other stuff. I makes me want to come back later in the day to read more. It's just a really good book keep up the good work.
I think it is pretty good, but the only problem I got is how you main write in paragraphs. Mind you that I'm only on chap 2, so I'm hopeful there is improvement in later chaps.P.S make sure you reread and edit you chapters just to be safe. Have a nice day or night
Ngl I wouldn't be surprised if any other author would just cut the chapter there BUT NOT HOLY JOKER
True, but if it's wind, he can move it anywhere and make it go somewhere else like a drone with a bomb, but slower
Bro it's a book clam down💀
I know if this is cornbringer, it's gonna be a masterpiece, but since I've never really watched Fairy Tail, I'm gonna be confused af. So I'm gonna wait for the next one.
Kinda fire line