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Vishakha_Pagare

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2022-08-02 JoinedIndia
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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare4mth
    Replied to DonDenis

    Yes. Been working on it. And trying to improve every day. Thank you so much for your reviews and votes馃グ

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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare4mth
    Replied to aleksandra_pano10

    Thank you so much for your kind review. I highly appreciate it.

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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare4mth
    Posted

    The story is intriguing and makes me feel like I am watching an incarnation anime but with better details. Honestly, good job author! It kind of lures you(reader) in....

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    The Insurrector
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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare4mth
    Posted

    I like the part where he was saved by the elderly lady and brought to life by her powers and then she passes him a book, which kind of increases the interest and makes you sit on the edge of your bed

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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare4mth
    Replied to JaRi09

    Thank you soo much馃槏馃槏馃槏

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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare4mth
    Commented

    You can try a little bit describing the things around, overall you are doing great. Good Luck!

    Ch 2 THE INTERACTION
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    COLD FAITH At different moments in life our faith grows cold.
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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare4mth
    Commented

    You work is quite different and unique, I like how you kept the paragraph short, which makes the reader want to read more. Good strategy there. I loved the way you have described the setting slowly. Keep updating more!

    Ch 1 Chapter one: A letter from emperor
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    My throne
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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Replied to Urcrayontastic

    Thank You so much, I am obliged to receive such beautiful reviews from everyone.

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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Replied to 1AM

    Sure, will do that!

    "Sumi" She saw the sides of her body completely wrecked in havoc. Her abdomen was lowly doomed with the amount of thrust she had driven inside of her body due to the soul blade. Her overflowing eyes and pale face was unobtrusively saddened by the loss of her only friend with whom she was about to have their babies get together. An irony wasn't it? One lost his mother, one lost her child and it suited both of them very well. Sumitra could never see her child, nor Anay could ever see his mother. Diana for perse didn't even have the chance to hold her own baby in her warmth. She sadly chuckled to herself after realizing the death grope of their fates. For Sumitra, Anay was struck to the fate of growing without a mother and so for Diana herself she was struck to the fate of parenting without a child.
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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Replied to 1AM

    Thank you soo much. It is a really blood-tiring hard work. I hope that I won't bore any of my readers.

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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Replied to Ana_Lessa

    Thank you so so much for your review. And please keep showering your beautiful reviews. It helps me stay motivated a lot more than usual. And write moreeeeee!

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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Replied to XLullabyx

    Thank you so much, I will do that.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Replied to 1AM

    Should I lessen the length? Or do you find it interesting enough? And thanks again for your feedback. I will surely work on it.

    Ch 1 PROLOGUE
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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Replied to 1AM

    yeah kindaa

    Ch 1 PROLOGUE
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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Commented

    The confusion is quite overwhelming at start but it blends nice after a while. If you could keep the information releasing at a pace little slower it would help the reader to go smoothly with the story line. Other than that, the writing is really good and loved the way you showed the story.

    Ch 2 We Need A Lawyer
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    Mr. Lawyer - The Advocate With A Demon Inside.
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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Commented

    Your writing style is quite interesting and I loved the way you have kept the chapters short which keeps the reader asking for more. Nicely done.

    Ch 5 Desperate
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    The Reddest Red
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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Replied to DaoistNotAvilable

    Thank you so much. I will keep that in mind and do that.[img=recommend]

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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Replied to TM_JiHi

    Thank you 馃グ

    Ch 1 PROLOGUE
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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Replied to DaoistNotAvilable

    Hii thank you so much for your review, can you please tell me how can I improve the detailing? I am glad that you found the time to review my book. I would appreciate your feedback. Thank you so much

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  • Vishakha_Pagare
    Vishakha_Pagare5mth
    Commented

    I thought that they the police outrun them and came from front, Clever thinking author.

    Ch 3 The End of the line
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