Yes. Been working on it. And trying to improve every day. Thank you so much for your reviews and votes🥰

Thank you so much for your kind review. I highly appreciate it.

The story is intriguing and makes me feel like I am watching an incarnation anime but with better details. Honestly, good job author! It kind of lures you(reader) in....

I like the part where he was saved by the elderly lady and brought to life by her powers and then she passes him a book, which kind of increases the interest and makes you sit on the edge of your bed

Thank you soo much😍😍😍

You can try a little bit describing the things around, overall you are doing great. Good Luck!

You work is quite different and unique, I like how you kept the paragraph short, which makes the reader want to read more. Good strategy there. I loved the way you have described the setting slowly. Keep updating more!

Thank You so much, I am obliged to receive such beautiful reviews from everyone.

Sure, will do that!

Thank you soo much. It is a really blood-tiring hard work. I hope that I won't bore any of my readers.

Thank you so so much for your review. And please keep showering your beautiful reviews. It helps me stay motivated a lot more than usual. And write moreeeeee!

Thank you so much, I will do that.

Should I lessen the length? Or do you find it interesting enough? And thanks again for your feedback. I will surely work on it.

yeah kindaa

The confusion is quite overwhelming at start but it blends nice after a while. If you could keep the information releasing at a pace little slower it would help the reader to go smoothly with the story line. Other than that, the writing is really good and loved the way you showed the story.

Your writing style is quite interesting and I loved the way you have kept the chapters short which keeps the reader asking for more. Nicely done.

Thank you so much. I will keep that in mind and do that.[img=recommend]

Thank you 🥰

Hii thank you so much for your review, can you please tell me how can I improve the detailing? I am glad that you found the time to review my book. I would appreciate your feedback. Thank you so much

I thought that they the police outrun them and came from front, Clever thinking author.