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A song for my ears
Without a doubt the worst chapter in the entire novel, deleting it and pretending that it never existed would be ideal, not only is it useless but it makes you see the protagonist as a retard with so much power but not using it at all, and this father ...ugh. Yes... I will pretend that the last 3 chapters do not exist.
There's no way it's like that, it would be complete disgust, not only Danzo completely disgusting in his design but it would be a total insult to the original Naruto to mix him with someone so pathetic.
Veo un solo problema en toda la historia... olvidas a los personajes y mundos que aun no ha visitado, te estas concentrando tanto en añadir y añadir que dejas de lado lo inconcluso, es decir se que cada mundo tendrá su trama, pero creo que era mejor resolver lo que ya teníamos. Bueno que se yo, quizás lo pienso demasiado pero hay tantos conceptos añadidos a la historia que se ha vuelto bastante confusa, no compleja, confusa.
Akeno de Highschool DxD
That's where you're wrong, Quirrel is not even remotely a powerful wizard, one of the reasons why he joined Voldemort was because of his desire for power and disgust at his weakness, Voldy himself spoke badly of him saying how pathetic he was. On the other hand, Voldemort had no choice but to join him, he was in a precarious situation.
I'll be honest, I started crying with Pandora's death, I don't know why... excellent fanfic so far, it's the best HP fanfic I've ever read For some strange reason there aren't many good ones with an OG lol everyone else is mostly Harry or Draco.
The beginning was... pretty bad. I mean, he is a normal teenager until that moment (in terms of his life and personality) suddenly lightning strikes, he decides to brandish it and throw it at two apparent gods saying 'get out of my city!'... dude, that was cringe , unreal and disappointing, All that in maybe what? 500 words? bruh .
Honestly, my only prejudice so far is Alex's attitude, he's too unfriendly, I don't see a way to build any kind of romance, friendship or at least for him to progress in his life having that attitude 24/7.