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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed2d
    Replied to Barry_Ahmed

    I know you've already finished the book, but you get what I mean

    Ch 92 Problems at home
    Souls in Teyvat
    Video Games · ARandomMob
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed2d
    Commented

    Great chapter. Read it twice and was still as good as the first time. Thanks for the daily uploads, keep up the amazing work

    Ch 92 Problems at home
    Souls in Teyvat
    Video Games · ARandomMob
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed3d
    Commented

    Good chapter

    Ch 102 Chapter 102
    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
    Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed5d
    Commented

    Amazing chapter

    Ch 88 A Cold Meeting Times 2
    Souls in Teyvat
    Video Games · ARandomMob
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed9d
    Commented

    A double chapter. I'm pleasantly surprised. Hopefully we see Anna again. I kinda liked their dynamic, however short it was. Nice chapter

    Ch 18 Chapter 19 Dr Killian
    Marvel: Why Can't Luck Be a superpower
    Movies · LORD_INDRATH
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed10d
    Commented

    TFTC. For scene changes you could use dotted lines to make it more obvious. It might get confusing later without them. That's just a suggestion though

    Ch 16 Chapter 17 I'm a big girl
    Marvel: Why Can't Luck Be a superpower
    Movies · LORD_INDRATH
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed11d
    Commented

    Why one chapter every 2 weeks?

    Ch 58 Adorabella Greengrass -Start of Year Two Arc-
    The Heir To Magic
    Book&Literature · easyread
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed13d
    Commented

    I'm not sure if you listened to my suggestion or were planning to increase the chapter length already. Either way, I thank you. The chapter was good. Nice work

    Ch 11 Chapter 12 Ahh shit here we go again
    Marvel: Why Can't Luck Be a superpower
    Movies · LORD_INDRATH
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed13d
    Commented

    The story seems interesting, grammar is good enough. My only problem for now is the length of the chapters. They're really short

    Ch 11 ⚠️⚠️Attention readers ⚠️⚠️
    Marvel: Why Can't Luck Be a superpower
    Movies · LORD_INDRATH
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed14d
    Replied to ARandomMob

    I thought he used a single ball to make a new arm so I had to read your comment twice to understand it😂. Also, thank you for this mass release. I cant imagine how frustrating it would have been reading all those cliff hangers till we finally got to the end. And congrats on reaching rank 1

    Ch 79 I'm the Shogun!
    Souls in Teyvat
    Video Games · ARandomMob
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed14d
    Commented

    Cant complain today. Chapter was your normal length and the fight was much cooler than expected

    Ch 74 Raiden Ei
    Souls in Teyvat
    Video Games · ARandomMob
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed15d
    Replied to ARandomMob

    Anyway, while I have you here. Let me take the chance to tell how amazingly well you've done the relationships between characters. Mainly Kenshin and Guizhong (not their relationship with each other. Their relationships with other characters). Everything is clear and well done. Nothing is forced and we can easily tell where they stand with other characters. I especially like his relationship with Jean and Shenhe (I'm super excited to see more development with Shenhe). And the comedy as well, everything is really funny. In my opinion I think you did best with the baby chapters. I was crying tears of laughter in those chapters. Keep up the good work and keep pumping whatever fairy magic dust(gold cocaine or cocaine for platinum members😂) you're pumping in this story. It is a work of art and I hope you make it to the top 3 on the power stone rankings

    Ch 73 The strongest soul
    Souls in Teyvat
    Video Games · ARandomMob
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed15d
    Replied to ARandomMob

    Compared to your other chapters it's short. Now time to act crazy: I want too long. I want more. MORE. MORE. MOOOOOORREEEEE. GIVE IT TO MEEEE. GIVE ME MORE. BETTER YET SEND ME THE WHOLE BOOK. DO IIIIIITT!🔫🔫

    Ch 73 The strongest soul
    Souls in Teyvat
    Video Games · ARandomMob
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed16d
    Replied to Maybonnie

    He's supposed to die and eventually come back

    Ch 73 The strongest soul
    Souls in Teyvat
    Video Games · ARandomMob
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed16d
    Commented

    Worst time for a short chapter. Hope the other chapters won't be this short. No offense to your work. The chapter is still good

    Ch 73 The strongest soul
    Souls in Teyvat
    Video Games · ARandomMob
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed16d
    Replied to SimpleBeacon01

    I think he mentioned a personality change and extra powers. While he's there he'd get new powers and would have to act differently to survive or something (not sure if I'm remembering this right). Then when he comes back he'd keep some of the new powers and lose the rest. Dont know if he'd still have a different personality or not

    Ch 72 The last festival
    Souls in Teyvat
    Video Games · ARandomMob
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed16d
    Commented

    Amazing chapter as always. I was wondering if we could get some bonus chapters one day?

    Ch 72 The last festival
    Souls in Teyvat
    Video Games · ARandomMob
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed16d
    Replied to Psan

    Probably. The author said he had an idea for Kenshin dying, going to the Honkai Star Rail world for a while and eventually come back. Not sure if that's still the plan

    Ch 72 The last festival
    Souls in Teyvat
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed1mth
    Commented

    Once again I left it for a while to let the chapters stack. Was surprised to see that you hadn't uploaded for a month but your explanation made sense so I wasnt upset. As always, the chapters were amazing. Great work with Tokoyami. The guy is pretty OP now. The Deku fights were pretty cool. Excited for what comes next. Keep up the good work

    Ch 307 UPDATE!
    MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)
    Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene
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  • Barry_Ahmed
    Barry_Ahmed1mth
    Posted

    All genshin impact fanfictions I've read were too boring for me to continue. This one though, I was crying tears of laughter in the baby chapters. The chapters after that were also pretty funny. Kenshin is an amazingly well made character and his relationships with the others is also explained pretty well. Story is amazing. Unique power. No fighting actually makes it more interesting than a lot of fanfics in a way. Most of the other fanfics I've seen that have no fighting (in a world where fighting is constant) are super boring. This along with one other fanfic are the only exceptions to the ones I've seen. Definitely a hidden gem. Keep up the good work and I hope you can keep the update schedule mostly the same. That's another great factor of your story.

    Souls in Teyvat
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