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  • DaoistyVuMEd
    DaoistyVuMEd1yr
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    Im happy to see some improvements... (does realizing what he's doing is good an improvement? It is right?)

    Ch 78 Textual intercourse
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • DaoistyVuMEd
    DaoistyVuMEd1yr
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    Im not sure if shut-ins are like this.... I know the improvement of him having problems talking to girls to him asking them out on his own is pretty good but I dont think this would be related to how he converse right? I was just curious i like the novel

    Ch 68 What girls need
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • DaoistyVuMEd
    DaoistyVuMEd1yr
    Commented

    Good chapter! I think i maybe seeing some progress on the mc... a little? I would really appreciate if the behavior of the mc is also realistic...

    Ch 44 Crackheads want to eat swan meat
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • DaoistyVuMEd
    DaoistyVuMEd1yr
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    Umm.. ok so, I really liked the plot and twist in this chapter, its amazing how you made it that way. My only problem with this is, you know, why the girl let the pengu prodigy to do it with her. I know she was threatened but cant you make it like she just betrayed him in some other way? Like hey you know kill the pengu guy? I dont know... anyway i still like the way the story is progressing (obviously except the ntr part). Can someone tell me if night and draco ever did "it"? At least that can make me feel a bit better lol

    Ch 29 A Shocking Answer
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    Guild Wars
    Games · Kotario
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