the story is well written and at a nice pace, you're good at it. If I had to complain about something it would be how the protagonist is always with some girl. This might be a cool thing for a teenager going through puberty but I would like to see him explore other aspects of the school like the other classes a little more

https://mtlnation.com/novel/top-10-famous-death-scenes-the-death-of-kyojuro-rengoku-at-the-start From chapter 200 onwards it becomes xianxia, ​​but here is the link.

disgusting. these chinese mtls are disgusting when it comes to romance. It makes my stomach churn, it's so disgusting.

honestly, this was a waste of time, just like any other MTL. the story is basically the same as Cote's only this time with a character who pretends to be indifferent. It wouldn't be so bad if the author wasn't constantly trying to demonstrate how good the protagonist is and putting him in the spotlight. This causes many classic Chinese clichés to be repeated like : "wow, this trash is actually a genius !🤯" not to mention how the author makes girls stick to him like a tick. overview : 😮‍💨

I've already read the MTL of this story and basically it's several characters reacting to the death of some characters. As in all stories of this type, the MC is non-existent, he appears at the beginning and then disappears. I saw several people complaining about not having an MC but that's how this type of Chinese fanfic works.

Another plot where the protagonist is purposely placed in an inferior position by the author (genin) and has the opportunity to be humiliated and underestimated by random and irrelevant extras.

Decent translation, trash fanfic. It's basically Smallville, the plot is the same: people affected by the meteor affecting the life of the pathetic Clark Kent. That whole teenage thing. The protagonist is "forced" (by the author) to get involved since his parents are always the ones involved.

That's what frustrates me about this novel, It seems like i'm watching Smallville again but with another character. The entire plot revolves around pathetic teenagers in puberty doing what teenagers do best (frivolities). It wouldn't be a problem if Mc did something useful and broke out of this routine, but it seems like he's just a complement to Clark.

I read it on another site and saw that you posted it here. One of the best I've ever read, without a doubt. I hope you post more chapters. 👍

100%

Finally back, lord.

fucking retard.

He deletes all reviews with less than 4 stars. All his fanfic he makes this useless spam.

Thanks. And i hope you're feeling better.

👍

that last sentence 😂