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Max_Alvarado_10081yrCommentedpro play numero uno - there is no pro play associated to fixing this situation, you're on your own soldier.
How could Number One defend himself when the beauty looked so pitiful and defenseless?- Max_Alvarado_10081yrCommented
hit em wit da
"I am Darius, your future Soul Art teacher," the teacher introduced himself. "For those who don't know the rules, let me repeat them. You must use your Soul Art to strike the training puppet. It will automatically calculate the strength of your attack and display it on the screen. You only have one chance and if you score below a hundred, you are out." - Max_Alvarado_10081yrCommented
A character that has a brain and isn't asinine?
The second test was also simple, but at the same time quite demanding. Soul Academies had high standards and they didn't recruit complete newbies. Besides possessing a high talent, one had to perform a single Soul Art which they learned beforehand. If they managed to reach a certain threshold of power, they would be accepted as students. - Max_Alvarado_10081yrCommented
√w
With the G.O.A.T system, he had the motivation to work hard and thus never once thought about giving up when the going got tough. - Max_Alvarado_10081yrReplied to MEME_GOD_LORDSolo Training
- Max_Alvarado_10081yrReplied to BlackDragonFish
Blue Lock does teach you a lot about Football though. To no be seen as a copy, the author would need to take a different approach, I hope that's the case
->X-Factors: F - Max_Alvarado_10081yrReplied to solemngamer
F is probably just being dead inside, which he doesn't seem to be from the looks of it
->Mental Ability and Mindset: D- - Max_Alvarado_10081yrReplied to marsolino
Seriously nagging over an irrelevant plot point when the man literally went back in time just a while ago?
On confirming the soccer option, the translucent book instantly dispersed into glittering blue particles before assembling back into a virtual screen with a spinning golden soccer ball at the center. The ball then disappeared into the background before new golden words started appearing on the virtual screen. - Max_Alvarado_10081yrCommented
The author single-handedly made me question if I should continue reading with a simple line of dialogue, how incredibly gifted
"I've got to stop following those soaps and web novels," Zachary mumbled while trying to suppress his laughter. - Max_Alvarado_10081yrCommented
Nice rhyme
Zachary had failed to pay back a debt he owed to a local drug lord in Kinshasha and was left to drown in the river by the thug's sycophants. He should have already died and on his way to hell, but here he was, alive and well. - Max_Alvarado_10081yrCommented
You, author, quick word of advice. If you want your writing to be quality over quantity(half the Novels on this site) then try using synonyms to not sound redundant. Or, use different descriptions instead, like (e.g. the gal, the oblivious individual, etc.) I do that same method and it also helps extend sentences once you get good at it.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Max_Alvarado_10081yrCommented
Can I get some type if height measurement?
The driver's door slowly opened, revealing a handsome young man with jet black hair and icy black eyes. - Max_Alvarado_10081yrReplied to Sleepy_Slime
How do you comment on your own thing, do I need a PC for it?
A sleek red sports car rolled down the street, causing countless nearby pedestrians to stop their actions and gawk.