I don't know about that... it feels a bit like he is jumping to conclusions.

The writing quality is nice, I haven't really noticed grammatical or spelling error but I wasn't really looking fot it anyway.The story development is okay but feels like a rewrite except this time the mc replaces hajime. I was kinda disappointed honestly. Due to the MC being clueless to the world of Arifureta I predicted that maybe they will fall together in the labrynth but get seperated and only meet in the deeper floors after a bit of character development from both of them. Or maybe hajime will fall as per the original and the mc finally had enough went on his seperate way. It's till to early to tell maybe the author different has plans for hajime and the mc I just hope that it won't be the mc replacing hajime in the story because that was already a story that was told before.Character design is nice it's like a copy paste of Sung Jin-woo from solo leveling. Although he hasn't use much of his powers but there isn't much opportunity to use it anyway.

Is it just me or is Doom acting like some third rate Chinese xinxia antagonist.

I like it so 5 star. I just have something in my mind while reading this. I get that the MC's power is adaptation and evolution and that it is a big enough deal for everyone to have him on their radar but Marvel has Darwin. Darwin is literally called the evolving boy, he even adapted Hela's death touch then became a death deity and gained powers similar to Hela including immortality, Asgardian physiology and control over life and death. He can even survive in space by becoming an energy being, Darwin can't even kill himself. So while I was reading this I kept on comparing MC to Darwin. Anyway I lost my point while writing this review so forget everything I said. Good job Keep writing Liking the story I even binged it.

Probably in a chapter or two when the chapter one took place

I'm not really familiar with the Threshold and the Shi'ar Empire so I'm not sure if I'll add it. The reveal of the Threshold basically retconned the origin of mutants so it is important but I'm still undecided.

I uploaded it in a wrong order because the chapter doesn't have any numbers. Then when I tried to fix it I just can't so I deleted it and uploaded all of it again, this time in the correct order(⁠•⁠ ⁠▽⁠ ⁠•⁠;⁠)

I think back then they don't have the rights for the mutants but scarlet witch and quicksilver became a grey area so they used it. They were experiments in the movie as far a I can remember.

Me:

This is what I imagine a 5 yr old kid with muscles hahaha

MC;

absolute savage

I thought the MC has something like Senior White's luck but its a bit different the more the story progress. Hope the author continues doing great work to the story.

Next gacha should be Forge because he is so underutilized, he is a technological genius and has a potential for magic as well. Then Bishop from an alternate future X-men he has energy absorption which is OP. Then Mimic he can copy powers as well but it is weaker. Last is Multiple man which is basically shadow clone jutsu except he can only create one clone but that clone can create another one then when he merges again the experience is transferred I think you should merge his powers so that it has a multiplying effect and is not so confusing when using it, like Iceman's cryogenesis which is going to be his foundation in adding ice powers like Todoroki's power. Maybe recruit Sage as well she is such an OP character, her brain is like a supercomputer and I think in the comics she has her own defense against telepath called firewall.

The writing quality is not bad considering it is not even the author's mother tongue, some wrong grammars here and there and some mixed pronouns but its better than the other fanfics. Story updates a few times a month but it makes up for its long chapters. Story development is much more realistic compared to other stories for example, in other fanfics it takes like a few months to just build a multi-million company here the MC wishes that he can do that. It adds a bit of realism, well realism in a superpowered story. Character development is good, in the story the MC is a teenager so he does a bit of cringey stuff like in MHA and regrets it afterwards (like he thought he is cool but not really) then reflects on his actions. My favorite character will definitely be Shego, she just adds a bit more fun to the story. In the story when the MC is waking her up and she does not want to move the MC rolls her up in a blanket and she said "I'm green and I can make you high, but I'm no weed to roll me up like that" it just made me laugh. Anyway a bit rough in MHA arc but it is fun especially when the author added a bit of lemon and the character growth he experienced in there is needed because of the similarity in the quirks and mutants. And he learns that the world is not all black and white.

why does every dialogue in this chapter that is not a question ends with an exclamation point it feels like the characters are screaming at each other