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Lana20221yrCommentedA doctor would never say such an unprofessional thing..
"Does Miss Palmero have any history of heart disease? We need to study her medical history. For now, all I can say is that it was the biggest mistake on your part to provoke a patient who seemingly had a heart disease."- Lana20221yrCommented
He hasn’t learned anything..
"Valencia, I am not taking your happiness away from you," Santiago gripped her shoulder and said. "I'm protecting them. You may hate me today for what I am doing but one day you will look back and thank me for saving you from the hell this love of yours will put you in." - Lana20221yrCommented
Not at the cost of her life as she didn’t die..
Killian nodded too. "We did nothing great. It's Persephone who saved the girl at the cost of her life." - Lana20221yrCommented
Ask her
"Why are you talking about yourself in the third person?" Killian couldn't help but ask him. - Lana20221yrCommented
Can’t understand the last bit..
Emily Costas even called her husband a fraud who was married to her just for money. She wondered if she should tell her mother that it wasn't Killian but her husband who trapped him in this marriage. - Lana20221yrCommented
There are quite a few mistakes here.. “do I digust you so much?” and ”HE wouldn’t sleep”..
"Do you disgust me so much?" He sincerely asked her. He needed an answer to this question or she wouldn't be able to sleep in peace. He wanted to know why she was so opposed to this marriage. - Lana20221yrCommented
“I am” not “I’m”
"I'm," Persephone said in a whisper. She looked up to see the shop attendant looking at her with a hesitant gaze. "Any problem?" - Lana20221yrCommented
Hmm really?
Persephone stomped her feet on the ground and yelled, "Nooo." - Lana20221yrCommented
She sounds very silly and immature here..
Oh, fuck! The vicious Villain found me again. Nooooooo. He busted all my planning. My poor heart couldn't take it anymore. God, kill me. Oh, please kill me. Sob. Sob. Why must I be the victim? - Lana20221yrCommented
Shouldn’t it be “he is your captor”?
"What did you call me here?" Persephone calmed her raging woman hormones before she would pounce on him. For the love of freedom, he was her captive. - Lana20221yrPosted
I’m frustrated by this. Over 100 chapters right now and still very little romance between the two main leads. Maybe this is for you, if you have the patience for incredibly slow burn books. But I can’t keep interested when after so long the female lead is STILL not even slightly interested in the male lead. Enemies-to-lovers books for me are supposed to be full of the tension between the two main characters who WANT each other when they shouldn’t. Here we have a female lead that is entirely cold and indifferent to the male lead. She doesn’t care if he touches or marries another woman, why should I? Don’t get me wrong, it’s well written and realistic, but the romance is taking too long to develop for me. I can appreciate that the author is putting in the effort to not make this insta-love BUT I think she kinda lost the timing and the nuance of how to do that while keeping the readers interested and rooting for the main couple. I also suspect this a strategy to make this plot eternal and have the book reach 800+ chapters… At this point I say let the female lead be happy with the second male lead and let this be done.
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I’m not sure I’ll endure reading about them both being so cruel towards each other for much longer.. I don’t see how this is fun..
He shrugged. "She isn't my breedmate so… when I find her…" He looked up at her slowly with one raised brow. "I wonder… will it be easier if I hurt her?" - Lana20221yrCommented
Dang this book is heavy on the pain and angst..
Malachi didn't defend himself. He let his brother release his anger as he yelled at him and punched him until he couldn't feel his face anymore and Saul got tired. Malachi wished his brother could just kill him instead of keep blaming him but that would hurt him too. He could already see his eyes glistened with tears from all of this. - Lana20221yrCommented
Not really sure how the author intends on convincing us to root for Ravina and Malachai to get together.. I mean she went veeeery far in getting us attached to a second male lead. So far I don’t see ANY connection between Ravina and Malachai except for quick sarcastic back and forth. Are we supposed to want them to be together based solely on the fact that they’re mates and not see any romantic interactions whatsoever? At this point I actually wish Ares would come rescue her and Malachai would die.
"I am indeed." - Lana20221yrPosted
Very well written. Original and interesting. Would have been a 5 star read, but it ended having too much of a religious vein for my taste. At the end it made me think of those fanatic churches getting people to submit to a specif set of beliefs. This did not sit very well with me. But I really liked the romance, the character development and the overall story. Also it’s the best one I’ve read on this app when it comes to good use of English.
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My thoughts exactly…
"No, its not," she whispered. He wanted to feel relieved, but she didn't relax under his touch. "But it is a measure of what you believe me capable of. How you view yourself in my life. That you think you should leave me in the dark while you appeared to seek another? Etan… I was physically ill." - Lana20221yrCommented"Question harder next time."
- Lana20221yrCommented"I understand that. And I am relieved to hear it. Trust me, it is far better than if you had had your head turned by Sarya, or fled in fear. But… Etan, you didn't speak to me. You didn't even ask me. I could have told you that my mother would never end my life that way. That she would use that kind of pressure on you to manipulate you, rather than to harm me."
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Yup.. that was very weak of him.
Ayleth believed it was likely true that her mother had made those baseless threats—she was a ruthless adversary, and would do anything to win. The question was, how easily would Etan be swayed in future. Had she married a man who would simply make these decisions without consulting her? She hadn't thought so, and yet, here they were.