What about his and life's son?

Ah so the embarrassing thing was she abandoned thier child in thr "sleep arc". Also a few chapters back it threw me off when you said the godmother obviously knew who aneji was but Kimi wasn't admitting it? What did you mean by that

That..... was anti climatic.

This is Neji we're talking about for all his InT, WIS, and LUCK stats he still somehow makes enough stupid decisions that they won't help him if not barely since I think the author forgets about it.

Why is he trying to follow the plot if it's just going to end up the same? Is he dumb and just letting whoever is stronger than him bully him around until he gets arrogant again and messes up?

See that's another thing Life is well.... freaking Life. There's no way she didn't recognize Neji as her lover then.

So..what's his excuse for not communicating with Kimi or the godmother like he just did now with Life? Is it because he's "calm" around her?

Because the author made all thr girls and omnipotent peoplr smooth brains. Basically a self fulfilling destiny

Honestly annoyed everytime you nerf or restrict him for no reason, she and her brother are beyond EVERYTHING and yet you use thr "I still need to use rules" bs

Hmm you'd think Azazoth would be chaos since they are the leader and embodiment of chaos.

Neji: I choose you Chaos Goddess! *me thinking this became a pokemom fic for second*

Welp what I wrote a few chapters back debunked my theory, glad you used momo's concept of creation to create a whole clan of devils, that's a near and original idea. If he took alittle longer and she never went to sleep, I wouldn't be surprised if she tried creating a "Neji" if she truly believed he wouldn't find her/gave up on her.

Kind of ironic that kimi and Nejire are the last two to be found. Annoying with Kimi though

So all of his girls basically moved on and had families of their own? Arthur with her "son" Rumi with her twins And now Momo with her bloodline? (Unless she never married or was an aunt from the main phenix group)

So gonna assume Kimi just split into multiple people?

You do know both Grayfia and Serafall are way stronger than that Kokabiel ? (Even with Ophis' snakes). Because it's odd hoe they're either the same or if not weaker than him

While the story is great, it kind of rambles on and you add way too many random details. Just get to the point of the story and plot, you don't need to add a long explanation or detailed background every paragraph.

Liked the concept, but he's too easily forgiving, sure he should forgive but he's being to "easy" and should play either hard to get or let the girls who have been pursuing him longer get him first before the other girls who assumed it was Shiro and already gave him almost all of their virginities some space.

Eh, I feel like it would've been better if Caroline wasn't "blackmailed" because there was no point in this little backstop if she was gonna end up being shot anyway.

Remember Kimi is just a "clone" of Nawab. She was a "worker bee" clone who lost her prime directive/orders from the hivemind either due to Neji's bs powers or Nawab purposely did this so she can still stay with him. They're implying she paradoxed herself by becoming Nawab and going back to the past when Neji just started in the MHA world.